[Report This]Date: January 04 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks really really great and promising, with the tags Vore, Toilet, Unaware, Insertion, Butt, Humiliation and the right size of 1/8", all my favorites :x I really hope youll finish this story to the end.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Now that's what I'm talking 'bout! Good chapter, and I'm looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
Date: January 04 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes the story keeps getting better!! I've been waiting for a story like this for a long time!!! This is pure perfection! Can't wait for some butt action. Btw is it possible to put up the 3rd chapter tonight? And the 2nd one didn't seem as long. I hope this story gets 60 chapters lol... 1 can only hope.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2014 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey man, I was actually pretty worried about you. I'm terribly sorry to hear about what happened. That's a fear I have and is why I'm so careful about my fetishes. I'm glad you're doing better and are back. I for one would truly love to see you rewrite an ending to A New Role in the Family with the mother using her feet to end Jake's life. I think it would be awesome.
Date: January 03 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi there. First of all I'm really sorry to hear about what happened. Sounds like you had a terrible stretch of bad luck. All I can say is don't let it get you down - you never know what's waiting in the future!
As for the story, you've set up well with that chapter and I look forward to seeing more. Your previous story was one of my favourites (as I recall I made an account to say so, and ended up writing a story of my own as a result. I have to to thank for the exciting experience that has turned out to be (I am still writing, just been on hiatus)) and if you ever feel like writing more for it I'm sure many people would be hugely appreciative. It is however, your choice. White what you wish to write, such is the fun of authoring. Do your best, and know that I will be looking forward to any and all updates. ^^
All the best - tokubetsu
[Report This]Date: January 03 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start cant wait to read more
Date: January 02 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok I think this story has great potential and I really want this story to last a long time... I'm sorry for what you went through with your girlfriend! And I think that you should keep this story going and if you want the alternate endings for your previous story.. I say write them! Cause I wanted to see the endings but I really want this story to continue .... But it's all up to you bro