[Report This]Date: November 06 2016 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
I just read through this, have to read some of your older work too by time, but I loved this plot! Maybe a m/m like your last story with a bug tf would be cool!? Some boys maybe from the football team become fruit flys and have to get help, getting no of course and end in horrible endings, as a smear, swallowed, shit on, by some of the twink boys they bullied in school.
Date: February 08 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
I liked the story I was kinda just hoping for a more happy ending but that's just how I am
Date: January 02 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
enjoyed it, looking forward to whenever you do a new story
Date: December 13 2013 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is amazing
I can´t hope next chapter
Date: December 01 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have a question
this is a long or short history
[Report This]Date: November 25 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, I didn't spot any mistakes but it is 4:30 in the morning, so if I remember I reread it later on.
Date: November 24 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Do you think you could fit some butt crush in here aswell?
like one of the bugs gets up on the couch and then one of the women comes in and sits down?
Date: November 24 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Cool concept, Kickyou. I'll come back later to write a more complete review, but for now I just wanted to say this: mouthplay with bugs? Ew! Haha.
[Report This]Date: November 24 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic plot idea. I always wanted to read a tf story about being turned into a tiny bug and no chance of someone ever knowing what happened, or that it's not a real bug at all. Also awesome idea of there being other bugs which look the same. Really liking the size too. Hope youll continue and also finish this story :)