[Report This]Date: November 03 2022 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
This buildup is too good. Such a shame it’ll never get updated.
[Report This]Date: May 03 2020 1:02 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
Omg this has the got to be the dream I would love this to be finished 100% I am sooo with Amanda in this one and all you pervs, this is the reality and what I am obsessed with and have the same desire I am proud to say that the only place a any man has come close to trying to turn this proud gay dominate woman is is the odors and chocolate out of my golden globes
This story should be finished for sure
Date: September 27 2016 7:46 AM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
Hey was woundering if this last chapter is going to happen is a great story loved it scince i first read it still love it now plz finish it
Date: November 18 2014 4:04 AM Title: The Devious Plotting and Planning
Hola
¿CUANDO terminará this historia?
o
¿CUANDO SE Dio Una CONOCER Un Nuevo Capítulo?
[Report This]Date: September 24 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
It is amazing how much you can describe this and she hasn't even found him yet! Brining up the "what if" was great. You could probably do a chapter on each of the other girls if you wanted to! But now finally we might actualyl get some interaction. Wonderful story!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hmm. Things are getting very intense. Some deep scary thoughts here.
But at last Amanda is finally gonna walk in. I believe he will go inside her ass, won't he? And that's how the story ends, right? Or will he get shoved up there in the beginning of the chapter, and you describe the sensations in there? Lots of possibilities.
I think you said like 80 forms of the female ass. (I didn't count.)
What I'm wondering next is how he will end up in there. Will he hide on the bed, a chair, her underwear drawer? All these places can lead up to the ass.
Also, I want to know how he will go in there? Like, is he tied up, is he blindfolded, is he gagged so he is forced to breathe thru his nose? Will his head stick out? Will he go headfirst?
There are plenty of ways to do this. I just can't wait to find out which method you will choose. (Maybe multiple methods!)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Very deep.
Good Guesses, but I dont want to give away too many spoilers.
80 is a good guess.
Frozen on the chair.
No restraints, headfirst.
Just one way. Up.
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2014 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
Maybe his morbid imaginings won't come true, at all.
Author's Response:
maybe... maybe not. it's up to the readers imagination.
Date: May 28 2014 7:26 PM Title: His New Perspective on the Female Posterior
Amazing story, love what you have done with it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad to know theres a few people who like this story. I'm going to take a break from this story and work on a few other stories but I 'll get baqk to it one day.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2014 12:17 PM Title: His New Perspective on the Female Posterior
I can't say as I blame you, dude. Now, cleavage, though? That'd be a different story! ;-)
Author's Response:
yes cleavage would be a much nicer place to live in. but he doesnt get that reward
[Report This]Date: May 14 2014 9:09 PM Title: His New Perspective on the Female Posterior
Thats quite a big perspective for such a little man.
Author's Response:
and it only gets bigger
[Report This]Date: May 14 2014 6:28 PM Title: His New Perspective on the Female Posterior
Awsome, 3 months very long wait! But I love this story so it's sort of worth it. Can't wait to see what you do with ??? and what will happen to the little pervert in this story!
Author's Response:
I think you'll like it
[Report This]Date: April 20 2014 6:10 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
Great story, I don't know how much longer I can wait for this next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm posting it now.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2014 6:39 PM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
While I'm anxiously waiting, I'm also dreading the next chapter. Will it actually be the last chapter, or did you get carried away? This is an amazing story, I'd be a little disappointed to see it end. I really love this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hate to see it end too, I enjoyed writing it. Theres at least 2 left
[Report This]Date: February 25 2014 4:19 PM Title: The Group Conversation and the Idea Manifesting
oh man, I've been checking in every day for the last chapter. looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
It'll be updated soon so look out for it. I also started a new story that you might like if you liked this one
[Report This]Date: February 11 2014 9:32 AM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
MUCH better!
:-)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: February 10 2014 6:50 PM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
Whoa there! Only one more chapter! We need one chapter to describe his journey into the butthole and othen one when she feels satisfied and does a workout or something with him inside.
Anyway, what a chapter. "A picture means 1000 words." My goodness, a picture for this masterpiece would be the two girls talking with one point to their ass and the dude is in on the stool listening in the corner of the picture. My, what a scene!
I hope for an incredible finish!
Author's Response:
Sorry most likely just one more chapter. What you just described is in a another story I 'm working on but I have another story to post first before I post that story.
Thank you!!!!! That was just the review I was looking for! I tried to make it as detailed as possible and since you posted this review I added 300 more words to the story!
The ending is going to be what you expect and not what you expect at the same time. The ending you have in mind right now is in that other future story I mentioned above.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2014 5:33 PM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
I've never heard so many different names for that tiny little 'Barking Spider' that completely dominated this entire chapter...
Great Stuff! I hope Amanda doesn't suffocate him to quickly.... he does need to suffer.
Maybe Kacie will find some of those shrinking pills and slip one into her boyfriends beer while their out on Taco Night! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I just added 3 to 5 different names for that fuckchasm to the chapter and 300 more words!
Oh she's not going to suffocate him. he's going to be around for a long time to come.
If she can find one?
[Report This]Date: February 10 2014 2:21 PM Title: Too Far Gone For Woman Talk. Way Beyond Girl Talk.
Another gem! I just hope you get carried away and continue writing, I really like this story and I would rather not see it end so soon. Amazing work, I'll be wating anxiously for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I just added 300 more words so hopefully that will help you out in the meantime!
I hope I get carreid away too. these past 2 chapters were originally oging to be under 1000 words and now there close to 4,000! the problem is theres not much more to add to the story. I already have the ending in my head and its what your expecting and not what your expecting at the same time
[Report This]Date: February 01 2014 10:33 PM Title: Girl Talk
Love the story. Sorry not many participated in your contest. Love your captions and this story. Hope to see more of both
Date: January 24 2014 7:40 PM Title: Girl Talk
Love the story, please continue
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm adding a chapter now