[Report This]Date: October 06 2016 2:41 PM Title: Beach Shrinking
great story
[Report This]Date: July 18 2014 8:43 PM Title: Beach Shrinking
I really enjoyed that. Very long. I wish you could do more stories like this maybe set in a strip club or a collage?
[Report This]Date: May 16 2014 12:42 PM Title: Beach Shrinking
A fast paced action GTS story that slows down for some action and plot points. I loved everything about his adventure especially how he ended up in the ass of the girl whos butt he grabbed earlier and it wasnt even her intention. The end seemed like it could have been a little more detailed, but besides that l loved how he became hers and how there was a 5 year time skip.
And like everyone else here I would like to see more stories from you
Date: September 10 2013 9:42 PM Title: Beach Shrinking
Great short story. Loved the part where he was on his mother. True irony that he is trying to get her attention after she told him not to go to the beach. Hope for more great short stories in the future :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: September 10 2013 4:14 AM Title: Beach Shrinking
This was as an excellent story. I enjoyed it much more than i expected that i was going too. The pacing was nice and quick and really kept you moving along. I can't awit to read your next tale.
Author's Response: Hey thanks! I'll try to make the next one as good as this one!
[Report This]Date: September 09 2013 3:12 PM Title: Beach Shrinking
This is really an amazing story, it's about time you posted it here! I really hope to see other stories from you.
Author's Response: Hey thanks! It means a lot!