Date: January 10 2014 6:23 PM Title: You can download that?!
Hey wats with the Holdup. Were wating for more to come. And why havent you posted anything since the summer. COMONE!
Author's Response:
I'm nailed down by my college work/part time work/crazy social life at the moment, I will try and get the next chapter out as soon as I can.
Date: September 06 2013 9:29 AM Title: You can download that?!
Woah. Nice violent side. More please.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, there's plenty more to come :D
Date: September 05 2013 7:23 PM Title: You can download that?!
You should put an order someone makes whe they use on of them as a doll in a doll house. Also the person crushes them in platform wedge boots like these (only pink or a bright color):http://www.aliexpress.com/item/size-34-40-ladies-boots-wedge-heels-Shoes-half-boots-nightclub-shoes-women-s-shoes-lb1035/1136280485.html
[Report This]Date: September 05 2013 12:04 PM Title: Room Service.
I wasn't expecting a bust so soon but you surprised me with the outcome. I do still think she might need some karmatic punishment but now it feels more like a game of cat and mouse than potential naughty story. Well done.
Author's Response:
As wicked as she is, Axcelia isn't as invincible as she thinks ;)
Thanks for the review! :D
[Report This]Date: September 02 2013 7:48 AM Title: You can download that?!
This is a very interesting concept and allows for a lot of mobility and flexibility with scenarios and situations, which, in my opinion, is what might bog down a lot of writers. I really enjoy where this one is going. The main character's eagerness, as well as her own macrophilia, is a nice touch as well as her responding to the darker sides of other peoples' psyches. I would love to see her use her toys for selfish reasons. I think it may be interesting if Axcelia could code a mega scenario for either herself or a customer. But that is left to you; I will merely watch and observe.
5 Stars.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :D
I wanted to come up with something really open that I had'nt seen before so I could explore as many possibilities as possible and hopefully improve on my story telling.
I do have a lot of plans in store for Axcelia, dont worry :)
Date: September 01 2013 5:07 PM Title: You can download that?!
Wow, what an awesome concept.
This is a great read so far, I can't wait to see how it continues and how it turns out for the primary character.
Definitely going to stay tuned into this one. :D
Also I agree with Casanova about the foot play, definitely my favorite. =)
- Xan.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Im glad you like it so far :D
Foot play is my favourite thing so there will be a lot of it in chapters to come.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2013 4:24 PM Title: "How do you get two Whales in a car?"
I like the story but kind of feel something needs to happen to the business lady at some point in the tale.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and rating and don't worry, I have plenty in store for her yet.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2013 5:18 PM Title: You can download that?!
ShrunkenGuy666, this is a really cool story. From a purely selfish standpoint, I loved the foot stuff in the first chapter, and obviously I'd love to see more. From a literary standpoint, there are plenty of things to like about this story. First off, the little details you throw in here and there really bring the setting to life (random technical jargon, how terrible her bed is, etc.). I also like your decision to make the main character poor and desperate. It's a new spin on the whole giantess/SW deal. On top of it all, your mechanics and diction are quite solid as well, which certainly isn't a given.
One thing I'd like to see more of, and I'm sure you have plans for it, is the backgrounds of the tinies. They didn't just pop up out of nowhere, so surely they'll have reservations about being used as sex toys even if they are drugged. That's definitely an area that I'd want you to explore. Another point would be to explore why Axcelia chose the macrophilia fetish for her online smut store. Is she a macrophile? Does she know that she'll have a monopoly on the market because she has exceptional coding abilities, and not many people of her caliber would even bother with target macrophiles? How did she get so poor anyhow?
As you can tell, I'm excited for future chapters. Please continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you for such a positive review! And yes, I can safely say without giving too much away about the plot, everything you mentioned is already planned and going to be implemented or explained sooner or later, so do not worry!
Thank you for reading! :D