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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

Great story, really good grammar since you are French. Hope to see more soon.

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2013 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi

I´m Mexican and This is my firts review and i want to say I´ve never read a story with better plot

Keep it up

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

Run on sentences.  A few spelling errors are expected, but you need to break up some of your paragraph's as well...

The story is really good!   The writing could use a little improvement, but your doing quite well for a second tongue...

'Propose'. ' Full treatment pedicure'.  HERE :  (your last paragraph) example=  Crystal took Lian to the parlor for a full treatment pedicure.  Lian was excited about it.  The giantess ultimately decided that his time was up and pressed down firmly onto his miniscule little form,  crushing him relentlessly under her heel. 

Pressing down very hard, useing her full body weight, completely destroying her tiny man.

Keep practicing flip-flop, you'll get better !  ;`)

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