[Report This]Date: November 14 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 21: Persumed Dead
Not the most exciting chapter, but it makes sence since the Lutice arc has ended, but the little tidbits od info we DID get are nice. So far I really like Morgan, I wonder how she will react when she finds out who REALLY attacked Sanders as I doubt Isabella will keep that tidbit to herself.
As for Sanders, it seems he's got himself a powerful ally in Pyrra; she seems to like him even more that she likes her master. Its a great little dynamic between Sanders feelings of guilt for hurting the catgirls feelings and his feelings or fear and hate towards them for what happened in the past.
I always look forward to updates from this, even at the lowest points with minimal action you still manage to keep things fresh and interesting. I really think this story deserves a lot more reads and praise than its gotten, its truly one of the better stories out at the moment.
Well enough of my flattery, I eagerly await the next update from this...PEACE!
[Report This]Date: November 14 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 21: Persumed Dead
First off: yay! I'm first, again!!
Secondly; it sounds like the A.S.S. (love that acronym, btw!) is up to something fishy. I mean; Swords running the Civilian Research Division, as well as co-directing MRD?
Definitely a conflict of interest...and never in a good way.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2013 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Things Change
Great! I really hope we find out how Aviel and Fionne escaped, it seems like they had some kind of deal with the resistance or something. This story just gets better by the minute, I can't wait for another update!
[Report This]Date: November 01 2013 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 20: Horrors of War
Next chapter: "Sword vs. Shield (Round 2)." And, that's a rematch you've successfully made me _eager_ to see!
:-)
Date: November 01 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 19: Perspective
Maybe the frequency wasn't set for any of them, at the time(?).
[Report This]Date: October 25 2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Things Change
Despite the slower updates, this is my favorite story on this site right now, so props to you! The recent chapter definitely thickened the plot somewhat, although it seems Aviel isn't going to change her mind anytime soon.
Author's Response:
I will try to get back on a once a week posting schedule, but work and such is getting more hectic as winter hits and the holidays began to approach.
And yes, Aviel does seem rather set in her ways.
Date: October 25 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 19: Perspective
Ironic that this chapter is called perspective when Aviel is deaf and blind to anything but society drivel. Outside of that, the plot is definitely thickening and I'm very curious what the deal is with Manchent. I expected Sanders to fall into the ressitance but this is much better.
Author's Response:
Well it was more to give the reader some perspective on the Resistance. Up till this point, we have pretty much only seen them through the lense of the Society and now we are getting to see them without that lens warping them. At least in part. Of course, Aviel IS right that the Resistance has burned down entire villages before and slaughtered people. And remember, she has lost her parents AND two partners before Sanders to the Resistance. She has reasons for being rather...hostile toward anything they say.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 19: Perspective
Hmmmmmm! Sounds more like this "jammer" might be some kind of subsonic vibration projector. Such vibrations can cause intense feelings of anxiety when they hit the human nervous systerm. Even panic!
Author's Response:
Possibly, but then why didn't Aviel, Sanders, or Flonne feel said affects during the train attack?
[Report This]Date: October 07 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 18: Facing Fear
If Sanders didn’t have bad luck, he’d have no luck at all. Thinking back on Fionne's dream, I wonder if cat girls are... Heh better not jump to conclusions. Society may or may not be more fucked up than I thought.
[Report This]Date: October 04 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Things Change
I kind of predicted that the catgirl was actually gonna kiss him but I didnt wanna say anything cuz I thought you might change it. Great chapter, although im kind of disapointed the sword interrupted when she did! Is this sword as crazy as the other broads? This is literally my favorite story on this site right now, I cant wait for next chapter. Kudos for writting such an awesome story!
[Report This]Date: October 04 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 18: Facing Fear
How did I miss this story over here _before_ checking out Giantess City?
Ah, well! What I said over there still goes. Such being the case, I'll keep my fingers crossed.
Date: September 28 2013 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Things Change
Weird development, I wonder what is causing those distortions.
The scene with Isabella and the others standing over the forest combined with the inch of snow being extremely dangerous to the shrunken people makes me wonder how animals even fare in those conditions. It seems one heavy rain storm or harsh snow would completely wipe out an entire ecosystem. When you think about the repercussions of every living thing apparently being shrunk, you realize the society really didn’t think things through. I don’t even think it’s been explained what unshrunk society members eat.
Author's Response:
Ehh, yeah. I will admit some things I just have to handwave, and how the animals survive weather outside is sorta a "they adapted now stop poking holes in things!" The real explaination, which does have problems, I know, is just that they find old caves, hills, and other places where the rain won't completely was them away and the ten years has seen them adapt a much better "weather instinct" so the speak. Basically, all surviving animals know when bad weather is coming long before it ever comes and hide because of it.
As for what the giantesses eat, that will be explained later.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 17: Old Soldiers, New Dangers
Suitably awesome drama!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 16: Seperation and Fear
Sanders playing the hero just cost him his life! Certainly didn't think that he was still alive after the fall and I REALLY didn't expect that something like this would happen! AWESOME CHAPTER!
[Report This]Date: September 20 2013 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 16: Seperation and Fear
Hoo-boy!
So, even if this catgirl doesn't eat Sanders, herself (out of some vestigial bit of human conscience or gratitude, or whatever), she might still turn him over to one of her handlers. Like Slutice, for instance!
I don't know which of those two possibilities is the lesser evil. :-(
[Report This]Date: September 14 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 15: Sisters of Lose
Huh interesting development.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2013 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 15: Sisters of Lose
Flonne had a post-traumatic flashback? Mui mysterioso!
[Report This]Date: September 13 2013 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Things Change
Either fionne is on some shit and imagining things or she's remembering a long repressed sad past.
Great chapter for her development btw...
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But the more I think about how badly this violence has gotten, the more I think about how weird it is that people are getting hurt and killed over something as trivial as what started this whole thing!
I mean, when Lutice and their friends first saw the group I kind of expected the giga bitches to maybe toss and bully the tiny people a bit and then be on their way...But BOY how badly things have escalated! Cmon Lutice and pals are supposed to be trained soldiers and suddenly they become murderous cunts, capable of killing even other giantess's! Its breaks my suspension of disbelief a little...
I guess the weirdest thing has been the "demonizing" of the resistance this entire story has been telling and then show us that the most violence and damage that the group of main characters have recieved thus far has been from their own kind!
Its a little hard to believe that these Giantesses who weild ridiculous power aren't given psychiatric exams and if they did how did THESE loose cannons get past!
Great ark to be sure, but the way that its escalated to life/death is what throws me for a loop a little...Just a bit of criticism from me this time, other than that, I mostly have nothing but good things to say about this story!
[Report This]Date: September 07 2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: Things Change
Its been hard to root for the resistance with the things youve had them do, like blowing people up and shooting women and children...But it seems the Society isnt just rainbows and ponies either.
Im a little offset as to why Lutice when from hearthearted hero in Sanders mind to a crazy muderous bitch the next time they met...Has she gone mad with power or something?
Also, I hope we start getting some resistance characters we actually care about, this story so far (besides Lutice & pals) seems to be painting the Society as saviors and the resistance as brutish thugs.
As it stands now, it doesn't seem like the resistance even has much to pose a threat against a gts...Do they have their own giantess's? Or maybe they have teams of badass giantess killers like Chijinda and his team in the game? You DO have magic in this universe so it would be believable to have some tinies that can go up against a giantess...
Anyway great job so far, this chapter was awesome and I cant wait for the next chapter! Truly, this story deserves more views, I hope more people take notice of this one!
Author's Response:
Some good questions and concerns. All I can say, though, to avoid spoilers is that stuff will get revealed and...well things are not always black and white...or grey either sometimes... I will say this, though. Remember that so far we have been seeing things through people controlled, at least in part, and informed by the Society.
And thanks for praise, its always welcome!
[Report This]Date: September 07 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Things Change
Somehow I'm not surprised how the Sword ladies acted. I played the game and the Society is EVIL. So this behavior is more typical of the giantesses in the game. Giantesses like is Isabella is not typical and she probably doesn't know the truth about the Society. I'm a bit curious about Lutice. A few years ago she seemed benevolent and kind. Now she seems like a mean bitch. However, her old self seems to still be there beneath the surface of her meaness. I'm still waiting for that sexual action you mentioned in the first chapter. I was expecting it might have been between Sanders and Flonne (since she's not too big). The Society giantesses are just too big for it to be pleasant for both parties (though I'm sure mega gts fans would disagree).
Author's Response:
Indeed, these seem a lot more like the old Society Chijunda knew and ran from. As for Lutice...well... wait and see.
The sexy stuff will come, but I don't want to force it either which has been my main problem. Just trying to shove in some AND THEN THEY HAD SEX is something I am trying to avoid, but I do have a sex scene planned out and coming in a few chapters.