[Report This]Date: March 16 2014 1:24 PM Title: Working at the Spa
Just wanted to share how much I enjoyed this one. Hoping that this isn't your last story!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it! I'm working on a spin-off of this story with some of SmushedBoy's characters in his drawings.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2013 10:13 AM Title: The Games End and a Victor is Crowned
I just realized I forgot to comment when you first posted it(!), and I can't really decide what to write here -- there are just too many things in here :)
I feel tempted to comment that I didn't expect it to end so fast, but the truth is, I thought you had quit, and I definitely didn't expect a sequel, so... XDDDDDDDDDDDD
Author's Response:
I had the whole thing written before I posted the first chapter here, I wanted the later chapters to include art from Smushed Boy. I originally planned on the training taking several chapters, but my PhD program was starting and I wanted to get Smushed Boy a finished story.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2013 4:44 PM Title: Training Complete
So, is this a happy ending for Spa Boy? Or, is he going to masochistically submit himself, to more indignities, for at least one final chapter?
Author's Response:
I'm working on a sequel, got two chapters already, I might just add them to the end of this story if I can't get motivation to write a stand alone story.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2013 1:13 PM Title: Time with Judith
"Yes, Dear."
At the risk of sounding politically incorrect? Two words best describe the marital status of that house-buying husband: WHOOSH/CRACK!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2013 12:25 PM Title: The Games End and a Victor is Crowned
Well, it looks like he's been completely broken in. Too bad for him! :-(
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 12:01 PM Title: More Fun and Games
Insert stock movie footage of 19th-century U.S. Cavalryman, blowing "Taps" on a bugle, here.
:-(
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 11:56 AM Title: The Truth Comes Out and Training Begins
I bet he guessed wrong. Btw? I can picture Emily being played by one of the Fanning sisters. :-)
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 11:52 AM Title: Practice with Emily
How's he going to explain anything to her at half an inch tall? Come to think of it; how have they been able to _converse_ (in any way/shape/form) with him only half an inch tall? Seems to me his voice would be inaudible to her, at that size. Like he'd been snorting helium or something!
Author's Response:
Yea, it's probably best not to think too deeply about it, haha... I probably could have had one of the women lift him up to her ear every time to talk, but I figured that would get old.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 11:43 AM Title: At the Club with Judith
It was only a matter of time. :-(
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 11:40 AM Title: Unaware Emily and Bath Time with Martha
Double uh-oh!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 11:39 AM Title: Some Time With Martha
Uh-oh!
:-O
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 11:36 AM Title: Shopping with the Girls...
You know, for some strange reason, I picture Judith as Lisa Kudrow and Martha as Cameron Diaz.
I must be a sicker pup than I thought.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2013 11:28 AM Title: Working at the Spa
Heh! This first chapter reminds me of the Kratch It classic, "Joy-Mart."
Date: August 09 2013 6:16 PM Title: Working at the Spa
hey!! this is great reading.
I was wondering if you would consider keeping emily unaware the ENTIRE time so that the protagonist is constantly unknowingly used by her? Thatd be great.
Will the focus switch over to her? Looking forward to seeing many more chapters of emily
Keep it up, excellent writing style.
Author's Response:
Yea, kind of late for that now, haha. I'll consider making a friend of hers and have her be unaware if/when I write the sequel...
[Report This]Date: August 09 2013 3:25 PM Title: Working at the Spa
Awesome story, I like the focus on feet so far, and the size of Kyle, though you may want to consider a different rating than G if you know what I mean heh
-Jake
Author's Response:
Hey thanks! I tried to change it once, but it didn't go through, I think I've got it working now. Feet are pretty much my main fetish, so that's going to be the main focus in this story.
Date: August 04 2013 11:01 AM Title: Working at the Spa
Simply Amazing content! Please continue I can't wait to read what Emily has in store for kyle! :D
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: August 01 2013 7:59 PM Title: At the Club with Judith
I can't wait for the next chapter! Much prefer the younger character vs the older woman. This is a great story can't wait till he finds out he wasn't rented, maybe he won't even find out, stuck with Emily maybe passed to her friends or a nice little sex toy for her room! I really hope you go beyond feet, it's not one of my personal favorites. By expanding on this you could draw in more people and maybe this story will really get the attention it deserves. This story is pretty amazing just keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks! Feet are pretty much my main fetish, but I am working on a sequel, I'm hoping to have at least one chapter on insertion and one mouth related, it will take awhile because I'm working on my PhD right now...
Date: July 30 2013 9:06 PM Title: Working at the Spa
See? I told you people will love this incredible work!
Author's Response:
Yea, you were right!
Date: July 30 2013 7:11 AM Title: Some Time With Martha
great story. i hope Emily remains unaware of the little guy at her feet
Date: July 26 2013 4:16 AM Title: Some Time With Martha
Very enjoyable story. Looking forward to seeing how he deals with the fact that Martha isn't planning on taking him back. Thanks for writing.