Geeman

This was an absolutely great story. It's a shame that it hasn't been updated in awhile. You should continue your writing style however. Whether it's in this community or in an other medium. I truly enjoyed the plot more than some other writers may have but it would be a shame to see you stop writing all together.

Respectfully, 

Mrblack01

Aaaaaaaaaaaand I just saw that was last edited in 2014 <.<

Too bad, was a great story !

I haven't written a review before, but I just felt like saying how much I love this story as a whole. The premise feels different from anything else I've read. Kim is such a wild card, it's kind of a rollercoaster. Puts a spin on the "gentle" giantess. And the writing is just great. I don't know much about writing myself, but the way some of the perspectives are written really absorbs me into the scene. Like Don's panic attack. I've had panic attacks before, and your writing just portayed it perfectly in my mind.

This is probably my favorite story on this site (including titan) and I just wanted to say thanks for sharing it here!

Author's Response:

Thanks, it really gets my excited to write when people leave comments like these!

 Oh wow, Kim is upset but I don't blame Don for acting this way, he'll need time before he can ever trust a Lyrian. Tommy's been in her bra for a long time now hasn't he?

Yep, they should understand that since she chose not to destroy the colony despite the fact that she could have with their weapons being ineffective against her. 

  I am curious about where you're going from here, the story has been incredibly since the earlier ones which I admit I didn't really enjoy because it was mostly Kim trying not to have sex with a very terrified Tommy.

As much as you love my story, I love yours very much. Kim is an awesome giantess, taking a hit that would have killed a normal Lyrian with such ease, the girl is amazing!

 Now that you've brought in colonies and stuff like that I can't wait to see what the world of humans is like!

Made some good progress on this story today. Thought I'd leave you another review. (I use reviews as bookmarks for large stories.)

Its very interesting the way Kim treats Tommy. She often flips between treating him as a sexual partner, pet, toy, and child. This I believe serves to highlight the conflict going on inside her in regards to her feelings about Tommy.

Good show friend. 

 Yep, you are definitely on a roll, Kim is definitely a giggling landscape! I am curious to see how you handle the human colony, how will they react to being told that a Lyrian is at the gates? Like a city under siege?

Haven't read the chapter yet, will do so later, but dude, really sexy drawing! You've inspired me to try my hand at it too! :D

(I will suck though, bad. I have absolutely no talent for it hehe.)

I'm not too bothered about the line spacing, even if I did take the time to mention it. One idea I have is saving it to a different file type. Also, Giantess World, next to the HTML button, has a button for pasting text from Microsoft Word. Note the Microsoft Word logo. I've never had a problem with excessive line spacing it seems so I've not tried using that button.

Also for my profile there's HTML I did using the PRE tags. Pre us short for pre-fotmatting and if you copy your chapter into the HTML editor and use said tags it should keep original formatting. Do this if the stuff from the previous paragraph fails.