Date: January 21 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
It's nice to see this story back. I'm glad I added it to my favourites.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
Really enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks, im glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: January 18 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is a fasinating woman. Her beautiful body would be so gigantic for a 1/2 inch guy. I really enjoyed that little tour of her soft landscape...
I'll have to admit though, that I've only read this latest chapter, but, I'll be starting at the begining now, and reading it straight through...
realistic dialog too!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope you like the rest of the story!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I created an account just to review this. I must say I've read a lot of stories on here and elsewhere and this is by far my favorite. it has everything you could want in a small man story. Her being violent but non lethal is perfect. The growing anticipation for sex is perfect. Even the difficulty tommy has in trusting her was great. I just hope he doesent die at the end. Can't wait for chapter 11!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input! To be honest, it was your review that gave me the willpower to jump back on this story.
[Report This]Date: October 14 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yay a compromise for getting something besides milk. But in relationship you win some and you lose
Author's Response:
Your right about comprimising!
[Report This]Date: October 14 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Somehow you've improved greatly in the last chapter, I don't know why though. I am curious as to why Kim lusts for Tommy so much though. If you have problems with size, I recommend looking at the some of the writing tools on this size to get an idea on how big Tommy is to Kim.
Author's Response:
Hes about a half-inch compared to her.
Date: October 12 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
This is a wonderful chapter. I wonder what's on television?
[Report This]Date: October 11 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad to see a update from this story. Hope there is more frequented ones, because this story good.
In most of my reviews I talk about chemistry. Kim and Tommy have a good connection, it was rough earlier but is continuing on strong.
Date: October 11 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very excited to see that you've come back to writing this. Hope to keep seeing more. I appreciate how interesting you make this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad there are people that seem to like this.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah a new chapter, good addition but it seems a little short?
Author's Response:
Yeah Im not gonna lie, its gonna take some effort to start writting after a good time, not doing it. I just wanted to get myself in motion with this one, I've recently acquired a bit more free time in my schedule so I'm gonna be writting new chapters to this more often.
Date: September 13 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was an intersting chapter. I'm curious to see where you're taking this story.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2013 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story can't wait for next chapter.
Date: July 26 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
It a good thing he did not get put in her clevage as his small size would have ment he would have fallen straight through.
Here:
“He loved beautiful woman
You mean either:
“He loved beautiful women
or
“He loved beautiful a woman
Author's Response:
Fixed it, thanks for telling me.
Date: July 25 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Good idea adding in a chapter that is just about her drinking blood give the the whole vampire thing a kinda realism and is defenatily a necessary with this story.
Author's Response:
Yeah although it was too hard for me to do any GTS stuff.
[Report This]Date: July 14 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter! Also, I find it a bit funny how we're giving our giantesses superhuman strength and powers, as if having our little guys be so powerless wasn't enough! And I'm definitely anticipating some sort of revenge on the other 'normal' giantesses, at least after Tommy gets comfortable with Kim.
And let me give some constructive criticism, I hope!
I know Tommy is in a situation which in reality is just impossible, we really couldn't imagine how somebody would really react to situations that Tommy experiences, we only can write stories about it. But that doesn't mean that Tommy has to be somewhat dim-witted. I'm only saying that I hope he figures it out quicker, because unless the humans in your story never tell night stories, he really should know what a Vampire is!
Also, less adverbs! This is a lesson that has been taught to me by everyone I've ever asked advice about writing. I never understood why, until I started trying to use as less adverbs as possible, and then I noticed the difference when I read what I wrote. It definitely makes your story better, so, you should try too! Always try to write a sentence so that you won't need to use an adverb. :)
Oh and yeah, passive voice too, but I'm having difficulties with that too, I still can't figure it out, hehe.
Author's Response:
The adverbs thing is definitely a weakness of mine that I'll try to fix as the story goes on. And your right Tommy is kind of an idiot, but he'll start to figure things out soon enough, oh and I just posted a new chapter so check it out if you have time.
Date: July 13 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
really liking this story, can't wait to see where you take it from here. keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
After reading I've got to say that I'm enjoying this story. I thought it was interesting how you are unraveling her abilities. The only thing that upsets me is that you are using a vampire as this is the same thing in my next short story but they are extremely different. Hope to see more!
Author's Response:
Sorry bout' stealing your thunder bro. Im not gonna lie, besides the whole "twist" thing, it allows me to get away with some things that I wouldnt be able to otherwise, like her being able to hear him despite his size. Basically it helps keep things moving instead of me having to sit there and describe how close she's holding him to her ear and whatnot! In other words it allows for some lazy writting! XD. And I gots a plot device to back me up!
Date: July 13 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Vampire! I get what Kim is now! How origonal. Good idea
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I read your bio, I wish you luck in your future attempts to create a story. Its kinda daunting I should know, I've been lurking/reviewing for a while now before writting this.
[Report This]Date: July 11 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh Man.....this is really GOOD! Just found this and started it, then couldn't stop reading...Ha! Your size is a bit too small, (for my interests) but, the story idea and the underlying fear factor is really off the scale Dude!
I think your doing just great with this Gadjet. Glad to see that you've decided to start writing, it's about time! ;`)
Author's Response:
Its about time I got off my lazy ass huh?
[Report This]Date: July 11 2013 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Huh, a Vampire Giantess, you don't see that...well ever. This is a very interesting read so far! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback.