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Reviewer: Animike Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 10 2006 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

alright, i know you said that this story was supposed to have been a failed experiment, but personally i liked this one much better. while not as destructive it's much more fleshed out and gives kari alot more personality (hey, it counts too)

Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the input.

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