[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn, Parker keeps running into all these girls with low self-esteem. Hope his luck changes in the next few chapters.
Author's Response:
Haha, that's actually significant...And thanks for continuing to read this over! I'm sure you know as well as me how much these comments help.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
A shower with Katie??? Sounds like a nightmare-come-true.
Author's Response:
Haha Cary, I feel like Parker's a little sick of the nightmares by this point...Thanks again for your support!
Date: May 04 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Just when things seemed to get better they get worse, so Parker on the drug is a bit like Harry Potter? Being able to see what Voldemort is doing. I am not liking Ava, haven't read the later parts but we shall see if she can convince me otherwise.
Author's Response:
Oh wow, I didn't even think about that. To be entirely honest, it was a little bit of deus ex machina on my part (that chapter was written a year ago), but will hopefully be fleshed out before the story's end. Thank you for checking this out as well and I hope you're enjoying it.
Date: May 04 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Finish it! This is awesome because I still have no idea what's going to happen and I love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks Nsolo - that's all I need to keep pushing!
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ah-ha! I get it. Sam becomes small(er?) enough to fit through the bars and un-does the lock on the outside of the cage door. But, that raises a question; is this a normal-sized cage...or a hamster cage?
Author's Response:
Glad you picked up the hint! There are many more that I would suggest hunting past (and future chapters) for...
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was a really pleasant read. Love what you did with all this. Can't wait to see more from you man.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Asterisk! I appreciate you taking the time to read through it.
Date: April 03 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awesome! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I hope that you continue to enjoy.
[Report This]Date: March 30 2014 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
I hope it's the blonde Amazon making contact with Ava. She'll need the help of someone powerful to help her rescue Parker from these two looney tunettes.
Author's Response:
"Looney Tunettes" - I like that one! And I'm not sure if the Amazon will be as helpful as we think, at least for now...
[Report This]Date: March 29 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, Parker's skin is going to permanently smell like girlfeet! Maybe not such a bad thing?
This 'un-relenting' foot torture, is begining to dominate the story. Maybe, he could get to take a bath with one of them....
-Heh, heh, heh,... just thought that I'd remind you , again... ;`)
Author's Response:
Haha, I agree Cat. And don't worry - I haven't forgotten about your awesome suggestion! We still have a couple days (within the world of the story) until we'll see the bath, though.
[Report This]Date: March 14 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great update. And nice revelation at the end. Hope Ava and Parker reunite somehow. Also would've loved to have Parker give Patricia a foot rub. But at any rate great story and I'm looking forward to future installments.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks aaron! I would have as well, but I have to save some tricks for later...Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: March 14 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow! You tie some of the plot threads together. And, yet, you still manage to mystify me as to the ultimate aim of this story (other than the obvious relation-shipping of Ava and Parker).
Author's Response:
That's good! Haha, means I'm doing my job correctly...
[Report This]Date: March 12 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
Aww, Man... it doesn't look good for Parker now! He's got untill firday? Maybe Kate would hesitate to squash him if... she would take a look at him for what he really is, you know. He like's it! If he survives the stinch bath inside her sweaty running sock, he could maybe just start being a little more useful to her?
I think he has enough time to change her way of thinking ;`)
I'd like to see Parker take a bath with her. A long hot BATH!
Author's Response:
We'll see, Cat...And hmmm, a bath? I might be able to make that happen. I mean, she'll have to clean herself up on Friday before her big party, right?
[Report This]Date: March 12 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Would it be ridiculous to ask for more feet...? =D
Author's Response:
Haha well, that's a given! I'm glad that you're still following the story Casanova, thank you.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2014 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
Whew! This girl is definitely messed up. I've seen magazine racks, in doctors' waiting rooms, with fewer issues.
Author's Response:
Haha good one Cary, I most definitely agree!
Date: March 10 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
Good stuff! If you write enough chapters he may end up under every woman's foot in the town. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Good for our intents and purposes, not for his, haha.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Katie is such a brat, no I did not feel any symphathy from her outburst: the only thing it made me do is roll my eyes and think: "what a drama queen!" The only person I feel bad for here is parker whose gotta endure tortures worse than murder convicts get all because a teenage girls got high school drama!
Great chapter! The beginning where Parkers been remembering his fucked up life and contemplates suicide is awesome! It filled mewuith a dread and emptiness that not too many stories can pull off sucessfully. Its also real easy for me to jump into the his shoes, something that speaks to your writting and descriptiveness. Props to this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words, Gadget! I'm glad that you liked the beginning parts - I really tried to get into Parker's head on that one. And haha, I'm sure that we all knew a few Katies in high school/college. I hope that you continue to enjoy!
[Report This]Date: March 02 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Don't know why but I'd forgotten this story. And how could, this is great. Love how this chapter ends.
Author's Response: Nice to hear from you again, aaron! Thanks for picking the story back up.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hmph! Katie's just like every other spoiled debubrat: she thinks the under-privileged should _stay_ under-privileged.
Author's Response: Haha I agree, Cary! I felt like introducing a fun little brat like that would add a little fun flair to the story.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hey! No need to apologize; I frequently have my own brand of RLC's that delay me from updating as often as I'd like. That's why I try not to take longer than three months, minimum, between new chapters!
As for this newest chapter of yours? You had me going for a couple minutes, there, with the nightmare sequence. I can only hope Parker doesn't have a similar real-life encounter at Ava's school.*
*Purse riders, in general, always seem to fall out; only to wind up getting captured by some nymphomaniacal cheerleader or other.
Author's Response:
Nice to hear from you as well, Cary! Thank you again for the review. Hopefully I can stay within that 3-month span and avoid some cliched plot conventions with the school scenes!
[Report This]Date: February 13 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
...wha'- whoa! Has it been six months? Doesn't seem like it... Glad to see this brought back to life! Another great chapter, your really good with the dream sequences, look forward to the next one... ;`)
Author's Response:
Tell me about it, Cat! It really hasn't felt like long. Thank you again for your continued kind words!