Date: June 24 2015 9:34 AM Title: This is getting ridiculous...
This is wonderful, but you should definitely finish it soon.
Date: May 28 2013 10:50 AM Title: This is getting ridiculous...
Your writing style is so good that I wish to be punished by the mom too!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: May 26 2013 8:37 AM Title: Mom's not happy.....
I won't lie that chapter was a bit short, but I'm still excited to see what's next!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2013 11:00 PM Title: Mom's not happy.....
Amazing start! Can't wait for more. Maybe she can take them to work with her in various parts of her body. But I'm definetly going to be looking for the next addition.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2013 9:57 PM Title: Mom's not happy.....
An interesting story, I'm not really into feet so I kinda skipped that part. I think it would have been a bit cooler if you had described the shrinking itself in detial, how the two felt about their clothes falling off and the world expanding around them. Still the shrinking out of clothes thing has always been cool to me.
Hope you are well
[Report This]Date: May 23 2013 8:42 AM Title: Mom's not happy.....
so... Are they dead? Cause smothering doesnt always mean kill.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2013 7:35 AM Title: Mom's not happy.....
Great start to what seem to be a great story. Love how she has no shame. I can't wait to see where you take it from here. Keep up the great work.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2013 11:43 PM Title: Mom's not happy.....
Hey great job. Not into incest per say, but this is written very well. An it focuses on her feet.
aaron