[Report This]Date: June 06 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Jack's got a front-row seat, in the balcony, front and center. A smooth six-hour ride, in the most comfortable place possable,.....but, doe's he know about staying hydrated? It can get quite 'warm', and sweaty in a giantess clevage for an entire six hour trip!
What if he has to pee? Oh,no (not in there!) LOL! ;`)
*Hundreds of bikini-clad giantess's on the beach. ( Next Chapter )
[Report This]Date: June 05 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Actually, the mushy stuff was kind of refreshing. It's nice to see teenagers (even science-fictional ones) behaving responsibly with regard to de-virginizing sex. Which is why I'd give this chapter an eleven, if such a bonus point were possible! :-)
Author's Response:
I'm honored! Thanks a million!
[Report This]Date: June 05 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
please keep the story gentle. If its annoying you just take a break of this one and write a different one.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
This should be good.
Author's Response:
Should? Should!? God Damn it, it'll be GREAT!
*Dramatic Music in the background and maybe some explosions*
[Report This]Date: June 03 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
I have been missing out on this story. I'm glad to see i'm not to late.
anyways good job GMD Tricia's turning out to be an excellent giantess. I guess I'm going to have to read on and find out what happens next
Author's Response:
You got lucky with your timing! Next chapter actual shit happens. Good shit.(?)
[Report This]Date: May 24 2013 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Place your bets! Place your bets! Five will you get ten that he gets kidnapped by some other bikini-clad giant beach babe. ;-D
[Report This]Date: May 23 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really like how this story is going, there is a lot of affection between the characters and the dialogue is excellent. I wonder if Tricia will show her tiny boy friend to anyone else? Keep up the chapters and the good work, can't wait for more!!
Also, I had a question for you that does not relate to this story. There was a previous story you had not too long ago on this website, and then it disapeared. The story is called "The Pairing" I thought it was going great, are you going to reupload and continue this story?
Author's Response:
Any other characters... Sounds like a plan! I'll work on that idea!
[Report This]Date: May 22 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, I've read all five chapters in one sitting. And, I must say...it's been a privilege. Mostly gentle-giantess stories are a rarity, here And, you've done a marvelous job with yours.
Thus far! ;-)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've mostly been recycling material for these first 5 chapters, but here, now, I extend out. Add in characters, different settings, etc. Etc.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Firstly, I never understood why people facebook, whatever... I guess - no, I have no idea.
Secondly, the password, well.. at least TWi1li@ms or similar to keep brute attacks at bay. Additionally I think it might have been much more interesting if he was stepping (jumping?) on the keys and she connected the letters, I am not trying to tell you how the story should go, just.. I would love if You made their play a bit more sophisticated and detailed, like while "writing" he could go "and now press shift, no, no, keep it down" - also very humbling that he needs help with such things, You know. Just a random idea to stimulate Your imagination :>
Thirdly - no offense, but... duck season?
Fourthly, when I write dialogues, I try to keep continuous sentences of a single character in the same paragraph - it helps the readers to figure out who says what.. after all we do not hear their voices so it is easy to get lost (like when she - apparently - said "You look tired." - just another random thought.
And lastly: tired after just several minutes? I know he orgasmed but still.. he just slept for a couple hours.
Otherwise all good and looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
No, I guess I should explain. I guess I could next chapter. His new body has many different characteristics about it. There's a lot and I'll most likely get them in.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
The problem is what for does she need her finger so badly right now... why not just enjoy the moment - and why so quickly annoyed? I'd rather think she would be overjoyed by his passion...
I understand the plan for a slight turn to domination, but seriously... Otherwise was good.
Author's Response:
She is! Twas a game they were playing in which Jack doth achieved a stalemate!
[Report This]Date: May 21 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love feet chs and new characters.Im glad your adding more characters, it helps expand the story.
Vegeta's Brother??? Wht i Didnt know he had a brother. I cant answer without cheating. Is it in the Bardock movie? Wow good question.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2013 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Excellent chapter. Great that this is a mutual shrinkage now.
And didn't he blow himself up?
aaron
[Report This]Date: May 21 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
final flash? my answer no cheating here.
once again I enjoyed the ch. Where are u going to take the relationship
Author's Response: Ding Ding. We have the winner. That one scene is my favorite scene in all of DBZ As for the relationship, I'm taking it as far as I can.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome chapter! I loved the descriptions for things such as her lips and skin. Oh about that dbz question, I say: Distructo Disk.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the good comment!
And Wrong! That's a Krillin move man! Think Vegeta!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is already a really cool story, and I feel like it works so well because it hits so close to home. All of us have probably imagined at one point or another what it would be like if our female friend found out about our fetish and then acted upon it. Your execution is top notch as well, and the crisp transitions between dialogue and exposition remain both true to the character as well as believable. As a result, in just a paragraph or two, both Jack and Tricia seem very well fleshed out.
I'd just like to constructively point out that at times, particularly in the first chapter, you have trouble with mixed tenses. Some parts are written in present tense, whereas the majority of the piece is in past. Probably an honest mistake, but one that crops up frequently in first-person narratives. Otherwise, it seems airtight.
Overall, great start and I'm excited for more. (And don't listen to those others -- more feet! [Or just write what you like. That's the smart thing to do.])
P.S. I watched DBZ a lot as a kid.
Author's Response:
Cas, I'm honored! I love your story so much and feel gratified that you even bothered to check mine!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
i watch dbz
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. An I used to watch dragon ball before it got stupid. I like regular DBZ not the other crap that came after.
aaron
Author's Response:
Good man! I agree entirely with you!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
DBZ probably 1 of the top 5 greatest animes of all time. Yea I watch it.
good start by the way plz continue.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Liked this story immensely. Can't wait for the next chapter with her feet.
aaron
Author's Response:
Out now! Feet isn't the LARGEST focus of this story, but it's a focus.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice beginning, but please not only foot stuff - she must have some other ideas in mind and they should quickly find out that playing with feet is not the only thing they can do at this size...
Not to mention that 2 inch tall person would barely be able to do anything with them (except tickling, perhaps - still possibly nice, but really - that is why I am not much of a macro foot fan).
Anyway - hope she does not turn evil - that would be silly (even temporarily - sure, she may angry for something, but seriously.. she is his friend for how long?)
And of course - looking forward to the continuation. I hope they not only have some fun, but also talk with each other - she can always tell him what she feels about him while he is working, right?
Especially how she wants to have a conversation!
Author's Response:
Yo! Love your reviews! And don't worry man, foot stuff isn't my main 'thing'. I'll try not to be feet heavy. I'll go balance it out, ok? Happy reading!