Date: October 05 2015 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
I would never have agreed to be a 'soap bar' in the first place. That would make me feel sick for sure. Vacation sounds fun though.
Date: October 05 2015 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
I would never give anyone my passwords. If things ever turn sour...well it's best not to think about it. Hopefully things won't but you never can tell.
Date: October 05 2015 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
What's with her finger anyway? Hopefully Jack will be alright in there. Wouldn't it be tough being in a sock?
Date: October 05 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Cute. A little short perhaps. But I liked it.
Date: October 05 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Basic biollogy stuff? If it was really that easy everyone would do it. Wonder how Trish managed to get hold of the shrinking substance.
Date: October 05 2015 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the premise. The fact that Jack is reluctant is also nice; it makes it more belieavable. There could have been more detail in place and perhaps have split this into two chapters as a result but other than that I don't have much to complain about.
Date: March 26 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hot can I suggest they go to the beach and falls in between her 'sacred' place?
[Report This]Date: February 20 2014 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
when the next one coming out
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm really loving Jack's snarky commentary, and Tricia's bubbly yet slightly standoff-ish reactions. :D
Author's Response:
There's definitely more of all that coming!
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love this. Jack is busy pioneering his new girlfriends boobs, meanwhile all the normal people on facebook are giving him props for it.
...If only they knew lol.
Author's Response:
I do wonder how that would go over...
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
I know I'm a little behind, but thats ok... right?
anyways, I have to give you props for the in-sock content. This line in particular made my day...
"To anyone else, it would seem like Tricia was smushing a bug forcefully. No, she was just stepping on her tiny boyfriend."
This line was clever. before this line it was all from Jack's perspective, but this line gave the reader two perspectives to create a mental picture from.
Well done. Look foward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: January 08 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
Long overdue. But, undeniably, worth the wait. :-)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'll never be gone for that long again.
Thanks for the Comment/Stars!
[Report This]Date: January 08 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
Nice addition... Finally, we get to the beach! "I wanna go muff-diving Trish!", a squeaky voice came from deep inside her gusset... I hope the next chapter isn't three months away?
Nice to see this heading up the 'Most Recent' again!
Author's Response:
Tricia's gonna go to the beach, sit back, relax, and enjoy her tiny boy at work. Maybe take a peek through his phone too. If you recall, she put it in her pocket. Wonder what sort of interesting things are on his 'personal device'?
Thanks for the Comment/Stars!
[Report This]Date: October 20 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Moral of the chapter? There's nothing like kissing and making up to make a pair of argumentative foot-fetishists feel less like a couple of heels.
;-D
Author's Response:
I don't know if you're the only one, but you certainly are the first to find out about Tricia's hidden fetishes
;-)
[Report This]Date: October 20 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
That was an awesome chapter. I absolutely love the content of this story.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks. I feel like this story isn't really read too much anymore so every review is worth something!
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I certainly dont think HE should have apologized, and I hate the way she expected an apology, some best friend. Other than that though, I think that both he and she changed their tunes too quickly...She went from kind, caring friend to dominatrix and he went from a struggling little guy to a willing slave.
Just some criticisms on my part, I think this story is pretty awesome overall though, your descriptions and smut are well written. I just feel like the two characters kind of just snappped into their pre-desposed GTS fetish personas too quickly is all.
Author's Response:
To be entirely honest, I feel they did too in comparison to the movement of the 'story' (I don't know if story does any justice). When I wrote Chapter 10 I intended it to be a 'satisfy the masses' type of chapter which is exactly what it was.
Maybe I should add:
"Chapter 10 and all content within or under the label 'Chapter 10' of the story 'My Best Friend?' is not in any way affiliated with the changing of actual characters personalities or otherwise and should be disregarded in regard to the plotline and Character Development
[Report This]Date: August 28 2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love the change of attitude. He's finally getting what he wanted, too bad he doesn't want it anymore. I really hope to see more reluctance from him and more persistence from her. Please keep the chapters coming!
[Report This]Date: August 28 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
loved it but i hope you get back to gentle sometime as i liked that much more.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter!
I'm hoping for more abuse.
Author's Response:
Oh it's ok, Jack really can't shut his mouth so look forward to it.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
He should have quit while he was her head.
;-D