Date: October 06 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Dlaczego porzuciłeś te serie?
[Report This]Date: September 15 2017 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am very cheerful now.
I want be Jack again.
I respect your work, sincerely.
[Report This]Date: September 15 2017 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
It wasn't ok.
She should respect Jack.
I have hope it will be repaired.
Tricia is cool, but... i am upset.
You write good, i like it, but... You know. Before Jack was using as a dildo everything was happy but now it is not.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Tricia could be my girlfriend.
I have hope, Jack will grow to his normal size then, in few chapters.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2017 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this
[Report This]Date: September 02 2017 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
This is the best stuff.
I just love it.
I dream about this. I really want be Jack.
Date: September 01 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh man, i sincerely want on Jack place.
Good job
Date: August 31 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
I want change place with Jack...
Date: August 30 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I want be in jack place right now
Date: August 30 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh man it is super
I love it
I want some too :(
Date: February 03 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I won't deny, I liked this story quite a bit. It was a well written "heat of the moment" type affair that had allot of heart put into it. However, as the story progresses, I've noticed a lack of attention from the author. It saddens me to admit that, but in the end this sometimes happens to good stories. My honest words to the author would be best said as: "Don't let it get you down, just keep writing what you feel strongly about and forget about the stuff you've lost vision in." Because remember, you can't force yourself to do (in this case) write something if you aren't feeling it anymore. That being said, it was a great story while it lasted. Cheers mate.
~Johnny
Date: October 05 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
Have you decided how to conclude the story? I know it's been ages. I enjoyed it so far, as you will have guessed.
Date: October 05 2015 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh crap! Now Tricia is on a power trip. She will regret it of course. I know she will.
Date: October 05 2015 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sometimes you forget to put new sections of speech on new lines. This chapter in particular has some formatting issues. However I'm still enjoying the story.
Date: October 05 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Arguments suck. But they're important. If there were no arguments then there would be no progress.