Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Coming Out

To answer your question, it was The House of Tiny Men. It was one of the first stories I had read when I found GiantessCity. Although the milk duct scene was incredibly brief, I couldn't help but be fascinated with the idea. I enjoyed your version much more, as it had a hell of a lot more detail.

Here's the link if you're curious. Took me almost 20 minutes to find it and it's not even on GiantessCity anymore! Luckily the Admin(s) of this site are incredibly thorough, as they had put it in the Old Archive.

http://giantessworld.net/Stories2/house_of_the_tiny_men.htm ---About 1/8th into the story, I think.

Also, since I had to pick a chapter for the review, I chose my favorite. Sex is great and all, but the bonding is what gets me. The look into Kelsey's past was nice, because it made me like her character even more. Even if I still want to beat Brad into a bloody pulp. And the fact that she recognized Steve as a real living, feeling person really sold me on it too.

And it's funny that you'd mention Fight Club, because that's exactly what I thought of when I wrote it, although I had to Google Tyler Durden. You're movie knowledge surpasses mine. :(

Lastly, after reading the chapter end notes, if I had to geuss what Brad's fetish might have been... Well, it's tough, but considering Kelsey's surprise at how hostile he was towards her own fetish, I'm geussing it's Anthropophagy. No? OK fine...if it's not Plushophilia then I really don't know.

Author's Response:

Haha, dark but good guess.  No, it's just a simple balloon fetish.  :-)

 

Thank you for the link!  Your internet search hand is strong.  Talk about a blast from the past.

 

Thank you again for another kind review.  Hope the newest chapter rates similarly.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Turning the Tables

Sorry about that. I never remember to rate when I review. I have to give this chapter a 10, which is basically the rating I'd give to every chapter you've written.

I enjoy reading about Steve with Kelsey, but Erin's forcefullness is just so hot. She just lost her virginity and now she's just raped a man. I hope to God that she's just starting to experiment with him, but I know I'll enjoy whatever direction you take.

Lastly, what the heck is with the 23(now 24) reviews for this story?? But I see a Read Count over 71,000. Come on guys. This is excellent writing. Very satisfying amount of smut with good character development. And it covers a wide range of the fetish(speaking of mouth play, insertion, ect.) I've been a lurker, but speaking with the authors and sharing my opinions is much more satisfying. Give it a try.

I'll stop now...God I can't wait for the next chapter! Ok, done.

Author's Response:

Man, you just made my day.  Thank you for your incredibly nice praise.  You'll have to be careful or people are going to think you're a sock puppet.  ;-)

 

As for the lack of reviews, I'm slowly starting to get over it.  For some reason this story seems to attract more lurkers than usual, probably because it's a little smuttier than most.  But the read count is a pretty good validation of its popularity.  And then there's you, who have perfectly illustrated the ability of commenters to have a chance to affect the story.  

 

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  I hope you enjoy the latest chapter.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Turning the Tables

Seems like Erin is taking full advantage of her newfound friendship. I'm starting to expect that the next chapter(or possibly next couple chapters) might entail some blackmail. She seems to be enjoying it a little too much to just stop with a 'fingerjob'.

Also, I went back and read Chapter 12 again and although I saw that Erin seemed to be a little rattled, it didn't feel like she showed much resentment. But that's just how it looked to me. I'm not the best at reading between the lines and seeing indications of emotional stress.

Loved this chapter. Mostly because of Steve's reluctance. It shows that he's not just in this for the sexual pleasure. And also because of Kelsey's reaction(however little of it we saw). I don't think she will like sharing her new boyfriend/boytoy.

Author's Response: Eh, you're probably mostly right about Erin. I had kept her feelings and motivations kind of ambiguous in chapter 12, partially to make her a little mysterious and also because I hadn't exactly worked out how she felt. But now that I have a better idea about her feelings she should be a little more consistent. :-) Glad you're enjoying it. And hey, feel free to star those reviews, good or bad. Thanks for keeping me on my toes.

Reviewer: wizard13335 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings

Amazing chapter. More like this, please! :D :D

Author's Response: Do you mean this most recent chapter or the one your comment is linked to? It's interesting because I think they're actually kind of similar in the way the story is written with overlapping narratives. I tried to shy away from it after the first chapter because it seemed cheap. But they do seem to turn out alright when I write them, so who knows? Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: VividImagination Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Like a Virgin

Uh oh. Sounds to me like she really enjoyed that, and considering she was a virgin(still is? not sure how that's classified), I'm geussing she'll want to keep Steve around for a while. Either that, or she's gonna think that he just violated her and things are about to get heated. I'm interested to see how this plays out.

Author's Response: Yeah, I haven't quite worked out the exact tone to take regarding the loss of Erin's virginity, or even if it was technically that at all. I know the intended result I want this to have, now I just have to figure out the best way to get there. But I'm excited to have this new character introduced because it solves a huge problem I foresee happening eventually. I'm hoping to have a new chapter before the weekend. Thanks for reading. :-)

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Calm

Just read this story, wish I would have read it a long time ago! Everything about it is really good,  im sure something is going to happen when she gets her tatoo and im sure her sister is the evil giantess he keeps dreaming about! Nice work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  And I'm not giving anything away, you're just going to have to keep reading.  :-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 7 - A Little Taste Of What's To Come

Great chapter. I really like this story.

aaron

Reviewer: Casanova Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings

This is a cool story you've put together. You've got a knack for descriptions -- I can visualize everything really well -- and in a genre like this, that's a huge part of the battle. I also have to commend you on the amount of emphasis you've put on the shrinking aspect of the story. That is to say, I really think that less is more in these situations. Getting into the mechanics and nitty gritty of how someone shrunk and how or why it works usually takes the reader out of the fantasy, and I think you've put in the appropriate amount of rationalizing into it here. Also, I'm intrigued by the dream sequences -- that part of the story seems to depart abruptly from the initial premise, and I'm interested to see how you tie it back together. From what I can gather, Steve has some sort of double life, but how they connect is obviously still a mystery. I'm excited to see how that resolves.

If I had to make a criticism, it would be just to echo what Jacksmith said in his review. As of the fifth chapter, both Kelsey and Steve are somewhat one-dimensional (although the shaving sequence with Kelsey revealed more about Steve -- in a weirdly oblique way that I'm not sure how to process). While you did start out with a fantastic bang, and the action has been pleasantly humming ever since, at 10,000+ words in I still don't know either character that well. Yes it's true that Steve has some sort of amnesia, and also with all that action it would be tough to have a lot of character exposition, but I'm still curious to know their backgrounds. Kelsey's interaction with her sister was a great start, however, and I hope to learn more about all three of them in the next chapter. 

Overall, thanks for the unique and enjoyable read.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to write such a great response.  Originally this was really just supposed to be a purely smutty story, but as it's developed I've found that the characters are demanding more.  I've taken notes and mapped out the story through the next several chapters.  Hopefully rolling out more exposition at this point will look more like a deliberate storytelling devce and less like an accidental way to slowly tell a story.  I appreciate you sticking with it so far and appreciate any more comments you might have.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Her Majesty

Great chapter, cannot wait to see what ideas she has for him. I just hope he doesn't like what she does. Just my taste.

Author's Response: We will definitely get to lots of unwilling stuff, don't worry. :-)

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Coming Clean

I really do wish that you made the brothe more unwilling. Great story though. Also I think I can see Brie soing something to him if she finds him.

Author's Response: Keep reading and bear with me. :-) Steve's time with Kelsey is literally wish fulfillment, but there may be other characters that will raise the fight in him.