Date: May 19 2022 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
What has happened in the prelast to last chapter? Kaley was small and nearly dead and in 2 sentences it's like nothing has happened.
Author's Response:
Looks like you’re asking about chapter 23? Most of it is a flashback to events earlier in the week. The last few sentences are a direct continuation of chapter 22.
Date: January 27 2022 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Thank you for responding so quickly. I have translated it and also introduced some personal modifications especially in chapter 16 .... Apparently you had a great time with my huge pussy. And my juice...did it taste good? ...you know about my period...Erin's voice came over him. Her elbows held the hem of her dress as she looked at him, her face as amused as it was excited.
- Why don't you stay with me? I'll take care of you...You'll spend a lot of time with my pussy. You can stroke her and drink her juice every day. My panties will be your home...or your mansion. You will live there like a nobleman...
- Think about it carefully. Now let me clean you up a little.
I think ending Erin's virginity was a little too violent. This is not a criticism but just a point of view. Otherwise I left the rest as is.
I encourage you to continue and for my part I will see how I will translate the rest because English is not my language. Thanks
Author's Response:
I only ask that you acknowledge any modifications you make that are different from my original text, thanks!
Date: January 24 2022 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Til Death Do Us Part
Very nice story ...Thanks for finishing it but in this last chapter you talk about a girl called sheena and then the birthday party.... and then, is there any hope for you to take it up again one day or to write more in the same stile. PS. I have translated it entirely into French. Would you allow me to publish it .... under your name of course
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliments. It’s nice to know there’s still people out there reading this story and enjoying it. The last chapter posted isn’t a true ending, as I still have a rough outline for how I’d like the story to truly end. Yes, the birthday party is definitely going to play a big part in it. I hadn’t planned on introducing Jenna as more than just a name, but who knows. I might continue the story, but I’m not sure. I’m so flattered that you’ve taken the time to translate my story! Of course you can publish it. I only ask that you credit me as the original author, and include a link back to my original story. When you do publish it please send me the link. My email is strangerinok@yahoo.com
Date: July 30 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Rubbing One Out
I stopped reading around here for some reason I've since forgotten and I discover now that I didn't leave a review or anything, wtf?
Better late than never... while I'm not usually a fan of gentle gts, this story rocks!
(I would add more details, but it's been a few years now :)
Now if you'll excuse me I have some chapters that I need to read...
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. Hope you find the later chapters to be to your liking. :-)
[Report This]Date: July 23 2018 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Til Death Do Us Part
Well, I waited for this chapter for years it feels.
Thank you for even updating this story! I was really wondering how it would end, it's a good story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was actually planning a third act to wrap things up, but i didn’t consider that this might be seen as an ending. Hmm... Anyway, glad you liked it!
Date: July 23 2018 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Commended
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 29 2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
This is a pretty solid, well-written story. I'm rather surprised that it hasn't recieved any reviews since April, particularly since I seem to recall seeing it on the Most Recent page between then and now.
I have only one question: What ever became of the blonde girl from Chapter 7? Has her part of the story been written out of the narrative, did she come and go in a way that I didn't notice, or is her arc still in the making?
Author's Response: Thanks! Actually the last time that I updated was back in April, though the review wasn't for that chapter. I appreciate the kind words, it's nice to know that someone is enjoying it. I like to think that the read count is indicative of its popularity since there aren't many reviews.
The blonde was meant to be her sister, Brie, but I'm aware that some of my storytelling is muddled. I'm actually kind of proud of the last chapter, though. :-) Thanks for reading.
Date: April 30 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Like a Virgin
Agh, meant to put that last review on this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoy Erin. That's one of my own favorite chapters, actually. I agree that Erin's descent wasn't paced correctly, and that was because she wasn't in my original outline. If you're still reading you'll see I've given Brie much more of a story arc because she originally was the main antagonist. Don't worry, Erin's definitely not gone for good.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Living Large
This is my favorite chapter and Erin is my favorite character. She's so devious, and her dark descent was wonderful, if a little quicker than I would have liked. I wonder if we could see more of her? Maybe now that Kelsey and Steve are both shrunk, she could come back to punish both of them for getting her in trouble.
[Report This]Date: August 23 2015 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Smoke and Mirrors - Act 3
Wow. Just... Wow. Been loving this story so far. Can't wait to see more updates to the story. Also, I was wondering if you were going to be adding more unaware to the story? Even though it wasn't a gigantic part in the story, I really enjoyed the part where he got unawarily sat on in the earlier chapter.
Sorry for that, but love the story and hope for more updates!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! So glad that you've been enjoying so far. I'm just starting to work on the next few chapters and haven't written any unaware yet. However I might throw some in there just for you. :-) Always feel free to comment and let me know what you'd like to see more of. I'm always open to suggestions. Thanks again.
Also, in the extremely unlikely chance that you messaged me on kik last week, please try me again.
Date: May 24 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Smoke and Mirrors - Act 3
Is Erin gone forever? Holy SHIT she was messed up. She scared me, literally! But I love the dynamic between Steve n Kelsey so I knew she would get him back. I hope you keep this up. I love this story. Never worry about making anything too long, people like a challenge! I'm excited for another chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story so far. Erin was never a part of my original idea for the story, so who knows when or if she'll return. I have a feeling she's not gone forever, though, as she's a lot of fun to write. :-)
Date: May 15 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Smoke and Mirrors - Act 3
Ugh, creepy stuff. So Steve dies and comes back again, will he ever break out of his cycle?
Author's Response:
Oh no, him dying and repeating the cycle was a little cooler of an idea than I was intending. I really just meant that Kelsey had shat him out after swallowing him. But thank you for reading and reviewing! :-) I updated the end of the chapter just slightly in case anyone else was similarly misled. I'm glad you found it creepy, that's what I was going for.
Date: May 03 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Erin is scary but then our main boy and girl did have sex on her . Not sure if it justifies anything plus I don't like it when a third party discovers the tiny man. No good will come out of it.
Author's Response: Yeah, Erin has been a lot of fun to write, especially because I never really intended to make her such a... large part of the story. Thanks for giving me another chance to respond.
Date: February 19 2015 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Would love to see more of this one. Had great premise and left off on such a cliffhanger.
Author's Response: Thanks for your interest! I have another chapter mostly ready to go but it's just not gelling the way I'd like it to, and I've finally come up with a way to finish up this three chapter arc. All I need now is some time to write. :-) But knowing there are people out there waiting does mean a lot. I'll do my best to get some more out to you. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: July 23 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Glad to see a new chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Nice to know someone is reading. :-)
[Report This]Date: June 09 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Certainly hope you plan to continue this one. I really enjoy it.
Author's Response: Been too busy lately to write, but I hope you enjoy the newest chapter. :-) Thanks for commenting.
Date: May 09 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Oh, well if you're thinking that you may include it, then by all means, leave it in. I guess the read count is an indication that most people just don't care, or they actually prefer it.
As for the 'feet' tag...
So many guys are into that for some reason. I really can't understand it, but hey, I'm into women that are 13 times my size(usually a shrinking preferance of 4-5 inches). So I can't really judge.
If you felt so inclined, you could write a short foot scene, just to expand on the diversity of the story. Perhaps some unaware scene with Alicia. I don't think she'd willingly play with Steve, considering what I've seen of her so far. Her thoughts seemed a little too pure.
Ok, my next review will be of the 16th chapter. Promise. Can't let this become like the Titan stories where the reviews are flooded with conversations and debates. ;-)
Author's Response: Haha, as long as the conversations aren't starred I don't mind too much, but there's also something to be said for keeping the review count honest. Either way, I do enjoy your feedback. It helps give me some direction when I'm stuck on a plot point. To be honest, I'm not super into feet either and don't usually like stories that focus on them, but I do really enjoy well written chapters that feature them (no pun intended). And I don't know where you got your crystal ball from, but I want it. ;-)
Date: May 09 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Perhaps it would be best to remove the aforementioned tag then. It definitely turns some people away from the story. Now that I think about it... A threesome between two sisters and some random guy isn't considered such, right? I hope not, or that'd totally ruin the fantasy for me.
I think that when I found this story I basically just searched for insertion and checked out all of the ones that looked interesting. Not for the smut, mind you. It was purely for the interesting characters and storylines. :-D
Author's Response: You think so? I was afraid of losing readers if I were to drop that story arc on them when it finally does arrive. But being fifteen chapters in without it does mean that anyone looking for it or avoiding it might be disappointed. Hmm. I'll give it some thought. If I do remove it I will probably remove the "feet" tag too since I haven't written that yet either. Thanks for your insightful feedback. And I, too, may have occasionally searched the "insertion" tag for, ahem, research purposes.
Date: May 08 2014 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Crap, I messed up on a response and accidentally deleted the whole comment. Sorry! :-( Anyway, here's how I responded originally: Author's Response: Thanks for the read/word count compliment, I am pretty proud that it's being read as much as it is, even if nearly everyone is too busy to type one handed and leave a review. And first rule of the incest tag is that we don't talk about the incest tag. ;-) It was an idea I had early on when I was still just trying to convince myself to write the story. I only put it in because it would then force me to actually write that part out and not just abandon the idea because it's a little out of my usual comfort zone. Originally I'd already planned to be on that part of the story, but things took a far more interesting turn. Thanks so much for commenting.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Rubbing One Out
Holy...
I uhh...fuck.
So... That was really hot. Full body sensual massage...happy ending...then ultra happy ending. Where in the heck do they make women like that? She was brought up a Christian, she's extremely kind and caring, and then there's the sex cravings. I just... Damn.
Ah well. My turn will come someday. I just have to learn some patience.
Harsher and frightening you say? Not my cup of tea, but considering that this was what followed, and that Steve is quite indestructable, I'll just have to keep those things in mind as I read it.
I find it's better that you jumped ahead. At least now we know that whatever cruel and violent things may happen during the sleepover, he'll be ok. Then again, it'll probably be a day at the beach compared to what Brianna has planned.
Author's Response: I have some loose ideas for the next chapter, and I'm pretty sure you'll like it, given your past responses. As for Kelsey, she's definitely one in a million, though not without a darker side.