Reviews For Playing With A Bug
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Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow this is really arousing and you have quite the way with words, instant favorite for me.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm starting to run out of varied complimentary words to use.  Great as usual.  Please keep on creating because you're among the best at it.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

"she must be terrified".  Susan thought,   "A warmth spreading through her at that thought....."

I love it!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

You do realize the term -alternate- means not to repeat the same process only with a foot this time right?

 

You little sadist.



Author's Response:

Well it's alternate in that it changes the reality of the story

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