[Report This]Date: March 18 2019 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, let me drop my review here! Such a good story like this one deserves it!
I'm usually not into transformation, but this one's so good, it made me want to read your other stories too!
If just there are more vore writers writing really good vore stories like this one here on GiantessWorld... keep up the good work, Oishi1 (and I8oishi1 too)!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm sorry it has been nearly 2 years. I appreciate the feedback.
[Report This]Date: October 28 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow! just found this and loved loved the story! :)
So wish I was that German scientist.
[Report This]Date: March 06 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting collaboration. Is i8oish1 by any chance oish1's wife? LOL.
"I'm going to the facilities to urinate." That's a hilariously queen's english way of putting it. Here in Australia, we say things like "I'm going to take a leak," or "I'm going to give the goanna a scratch."
Author's Response:
Yes indeed. She actually came up with the nick a few years ago. I thought it was funny.
He was a German scientist, so I wanted him to have a peculiar way of speaking, especially since he was in a professional setting.
Date: March 06 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Origional idea. A nice, silly story.
Author's Response:
Yeah. I wanted the predator to have a bit of innocence to her. Despite the horror that would be present if this happened in real life I wanted it to be kind of light.
Date: March 04 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's a good story, although the excess line spacing is extremely annoying and made your story difficult to read.
Author's Response:
Sorry, it was essentially a converted rp, and I wanted to keep the paragraphs. I will try to fix it tommorrow if I can.