Reviewer: anonlol Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2020 2:56 AM Title: It Starts in the End

Hi. I've enjoyed your work for several years. I recentish-ly decided to make an interactive story on writing.com in the spirit of Tinyman0001's stories that got deleted. I'd like you to check it out and I'd be honored if you decided to add something to it, but don't take it as an actual request, I understand if you've got better things to do or no time for stuff done on your free time. Anyway, thanks in advance for your time, and I hope you do well on anything you're doing these days.

 

Here's the link to my interactive. I plan on posting individual routes here when they're made and have advanced enough.

https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/2234425-Giantessshrinking--farts

Reviewer: pkong Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2015 12:30 PM Title: Exploring her Mid-Section

Wow, your still alive! I haven't seen you in forever. 

 

Personally, I would like to see this story continue, but not if it takes anouther year to put out a 1,000 word chapter, thats kind of ridiculous. 

 

Still does this mean your back? Any chance of continuing your other stories (you are the same mr. E from writing.com right)? 

Reviewer: loves_assholes Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 4:41 PM Title: It Starts in the End

amazing first chapter, will we ever see a conclusion?

Author's Response:

yes but I 've hit a writers block and dont know where to go so I'm putting this one on hold for now. 4/16/14

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2013 8:30 PM Title: Defying a Horrifying Death

Great story.

Disappointing, short chapter.

 

Author's Response:

you say it's short I say it's not. you shouldnt write a review based on a word count.

I never see you write any story before yet you have the nerve to tell people to write more for your own pleasure so you can read more fiction. most authors put their heart and soul into their writing and dont need you putting them down.

it's not always about how many words are in a story but what they say.  Asukafan created a minimum of 500 words per chapter and if it's okay by him then you shouldnt worry about it.

 I didnt see you reviewing the last chapter and that was 3 times as long.  Please do not review my story anymore based on how many words are in a chapter. you throwing low ratings isnt going to motivate me to write more words it's going to wonder why i post when theres people like you throwing low ratings because they dont like the word count when it doesnt matter. Again, it's not always about how many words are in a story but what they say. 

if someone had revied my last longest chapter maybe i would be inspired to write another one like it but since i got nothing from that chapter i didnt think it mattered and it shouldnt because again it's not always about how many words are in a story but what they say. 

 

Reviewer: rhino2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2013 10:10 AM Title: It Starts in the End

Nice start!  I like your style of writing too, but Im not fimiliar with your previous style.  

 

Cant wait to see the panty entrapment part hopefully it will be a prolonged experience for the SM.

 

Looking forward to more.  Is this going to be completly unaware?

Author's Response:

Compared to my other stories on here and writing.com

It will be prolonged. I cant even begin to describe it.

Yes.  So far I plan on having this completely unaware, but I could change it. I dont know for certain yet.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2013 5:37 PM Title: Shrinking Yourself Down and Entering Her Room

Very good start, Mr. E.

I'm looking forward to its continuation.

Note the following correction:

"I wanted to plant a kiss on those opulent, pink lips, but thought it would be better to wait until she closed her mouth and started breathing through her nose. Then I could sneak out from underneath her bottom lip..."

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the grammar correction. I've actually been rereading the whole time since i've posted it adding a few words and correctin spelling and grammar mistakes but that one would have slipped right by me.

The conclusion is going to be EPIC but before that is a lot of voyuerism and almost every part of her body will be explored

Reviewer: BigAl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2013 5:29 AM Title: It Starts in the End

Looking forward to the next part, Mr E!

Author's Response:

Thanks!