[Report This]Date: April 02 2016 9:55 AM Title: A new guard rises.
I am really enjoying this story. I hope you continue it.
Date: March 17 2014 9:21 PM Title: A new guard rises.
This is pretty good to be honest, made me want to read more and seeing your new story reminded me of this. Will there be updates?
Date: September 10 2013 3:35 PM Title: A new guard rises.
That's funny! I was thinking of writing a story somewhat like this one. Well, I can at least see how it works for you. Its a good one so far. I found it hard to sympathize with Fred, as it seems that his wife actually loves him. Wouldn't mind seeing him get caught and sent back to his wife. I like the fact that it seems these arranged marriages seem to turn into affectionate ones. I hope Steve's works out. I'd like to see some examples of bad relationships. Keep up the good story!
Date: September 09 2013 10:43 PM Title: A new guard rises.
please dont stop i really like this story
Date: September 09 2013 2:12 PM Title: A new guard rises.
Please continue your Mamma Mia story.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2013 1:56 PM Title: Mandy's new mate
good to have you back pal. Im sure looking forward for the next chapter.
Date: May 27 2013 12:36 PM Title: A new guard rises.
man what happen ????
Author's Response:
The next part should be up in a couple weeks.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2013 10:51 AM Title: Y-oming
i really like how you concentrate on the plot and building of the characters more that the Erotic scenes i like this kind of stories please continue and hope to see Steven's chapter really soon :)
Author's Response:
Thank you,and we'll be joining back with Steven next chapter.
[Report This]Date: March 07 2013 10:19 PM Title: Y-oming
I was hoping for you to continue Steven's story, a little disappointed since this doesn't actually bring anything to the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and don't worry my friend we'll join back with Steven after the next chapter.The blocks are building and this was a necessary storyline to build the road. There will only be one more chapter with this particular storyline and then we will resume with the main plot.Have faith in my methods and I hope you'll enjoy where it's headed.
Date: March 04 2013 9:10 AM Title: She's here
please contenue i agree with deathshinigami this is your best story please dont stop
[Report This]Date: March 01 2013 9:14 AM Title: A new guard rises.
oh yeah shit just got real
Author's Response:
Yeah buddy,im going to be introducing other storylines soon.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2013 3:31 AM Title: Steven's birthday pt. 2
I like your story :)
And I hope that Steven goes with Mandi. I want to see that relationship prosper even if their *marriage* is arranged.
Though I'm confused by the sizes. Are the girls 20 feet and men 5 inches tall? Cause that is a huge size difference.
Also, an interaction between Steven and his father would've been nice.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.To answer your question i've noted the size difference at 20 feet for women and 5 inches for men is the averages.I have been pruposely ambigous about the character's size so that the reader can insert those details for themselves. Steven could be a little bigger or smaller and that goes for the other characters as well.I haven't had any interaction with the father because there's a backstory I haven't revealed yet.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2013 7:58 AM Title: A new guard rises.
wow slow down man. Youre making way too many stories at the same time and i love them all except total destruction, but you should focus on finishing the best (this one) first before starting another one. I am trying to write all chapters to my story first so i can post them all at the same time.
Author's Response:
Im like the joker in the sense that I have so many ideas in my head and start something new and not have an end plan for it. I know this is not a good trait for someone trying to tell a story but alas here I am. I have the groundwork in place to finish my stories my friend,it just may take me a while.Thanks for the input.
Date: February 26 2013 1:05 AM Title: A new guard rises.
i don't think this story is getting enough reviews it is a good one and i really like the way it's going please continue :)
Author's Response:
Thanks,I don't really write stories hoping for reviews but they're always appreciated. Im glad you're enjoying the story,and hope you'll like the coming chapters even more.
Date: February 24 2013 2:54 AM Title: A new guard rises.
Love the story so far. Can't wait to see how the role reversal plays out.
Author's Response:
Im going to start introducing character's and the new world that they live in,it might be slow for a while. Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 11:24 AM Title: A new guard rises.
Very interested in seeing where this story goes. An the average woman is 20ft an the man is 5in.
So does that equate a man roughly being 1" tall? Anyways it sounds cool and I hope there's some foot play.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review,the physics of their height difference hasn't been broached yet.I will definately explore different genre's in this story,theres alot of mini tales that will be spun from this new world.