[Report This]Date: March 13 2014 5:20 PM Title: A Penny & No Luck
That was a really good unaware story! I am always a fan of unaware, and the transformation aspect added even more to it! Good job!
Author's Response:
Glad to see that new readers of my older stories are still being enjoyed. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2013 4:48 PM Title: A Penny & No Luck
An excellent story that seemed to push the right buttons. I agree with the other reviewers - the "unaware" but intentional vore was very good.
There was a teasingly short amount of content to the story, which I found frustrating. I think just a little more action, to warrant the "X" rating would have been perfect.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response. Thank you. This was my first story on GTW, so I kept it short and allowed for the reader to fill in the blanks, since it was a horror story. Since then this story has spawned it own series, so look out for them.
Date: February 22 2013 2:25 PM Title: A Penny & No Luck
I really enjoy the unaware aspect of gts/tf if it's done artfully and I like this story. In terms of writing, I would suggest expanding on your descriptions and detail, but aside from that it was quite enjoyable.
I do, however, LOVE the intentional-yet-unaware vore of the ant-brother. This is something I've searched for for years in stories and haven't found much of. I would love nothing more than for you to do more along those lines. Also I like the fact that there is discussion about it later(her nonchalance was a nice touch) and I would be extremely interested to hear about some of the other things that she's swallowed.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2013 1:45 AM Title: A Penny & No Luck
This was a great story. I love transformation and the unknown cruelness
Date: February 21 2013 9:42 PM Title: A Penny & No Luck
Wow,wonderful story! I like transform,unware stories very much. I wish I can transform too. :) Waiting for your new stories...
Date: February 21 2013 4:44 PM Title: A Penny & No Luck
Thanks for the feedback guys.
This was my first story to tackle this genere, and I feel fo me it was a writing exercise and a chance for me to write without stress. It was also a way to give back to community I follow, and test my writing there. I always ussually try to write really long elborate works and end up giving up most of the time.
I chose the short story format because for this "kind of story" I feel an ending is needed, since I wanted to focus on horror. Unaware transformations and GTS points of veiw can really add up to a good story, perhaps next time I shold try soemthing more light hearted? Then again in horror we can have the delcious cookies, and be unaware too.
As for what kind of stories I write, I write stories that are intresting to me, I create a few chaarcters and then drop them into random settings and let them do the storytelling, Good Authors should just sit back and watch. I do heavily critque my own work, and even felt on this one that it was not very well polished as it could have been better, for that I'm sorry.
Thanks Again,
Eric A Freak
Date: February 21 2013 3:47 PM Title: A Penny & No Luck
Great story! Love the panties transformation and being worn by his sister.
Do you do food transformations like being turned into a cookie?
Or body part like being turned into someone's butt?
[Report This]Date: February 21 2013 1:54 PM Title: A Penny & No Luck
Amazing story!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2013 8:02 AM Title: A Penny & No Luck
hey :) that was one of the best stories I've read here in a while. and welcome aha. really, thank you so much for sharing this story. i have to say im mostly into unaware, which is so damn rare to find under good authors. and pleas believe me, i just loved your story. the writing style was great, it had an awesome plot, lots of irony/sarcasm which i so damn love to read in a shrinking/tf story combined with bad luck, which also is a favorite topic of mine. th e best thing though was, you combined my all time favorite plot ideas unaware transformation and vore. i always loved unaware panties tf, and also loved the idea of tf into a tiny bug or ant and get vored. so this story just came out of nowhere like a miracle to me. even if it's "just" a short story, it for sure is already under my top10 stories on here, just because it was nearly perfect for me in the topic and plot. im very picky of what i like. 10 out of 10 stars (; also it would be really interesting, just if you want of course, if you could come back at me via mail or im. i would be curious about a lot of things, did you publish other stories before somewhere else? do you take story requests or commissions? that would be just awesome actually. my mail is "miaraluc at yahoo dot com" would be cool to hear from you. it's really annoying you cant write private messages on this site to authors, so, yeah :) again, amazing story. and i hope you will continue to write.