Reviews For Total destruction
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Reviewer: Raiza Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 27 2013 1:21 AM Title: Game Over

Enjoyed the general idea, but some spell check and anatomy checks would be most welcome.



Author's Response:

Granted there were aspects of the story that were very unrealistic.My grammar was very sloppy in this story and for that I apologize. The anatomic part of it was really something I didn't focus on too much because it was meant to be a story about total destruction and so the action pretty much was more pivotal to me than factual physics. Thanks for the review(I always aprreciate them good or bad as they are the only way I know how to improve)

Reviewer: B26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2013 3:25 AM Title: Game Over

Wow... that was brutal. 
I liked the fact that she became a part of him at the end. There are not a lot of M/f stories so it was a nice change.
I hope there will be more like this one 

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