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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!

"I'llputil." Heh, clever. Homage to Lilliput, i assume? Good setup so far. I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

You are correct, Sir Pixis. An anagram of Lilliput. Now what about the name of their capitol? Figured it out yet?

Reviewer: Malaka Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 1:42 PM Title: Chapter II: Countryside

It's still early, but I like this so far. Love the main character. Just hope she learns the language soon, though - a misunderstanding might turn out to be bad news for the tiny people!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! It was quite a surprise when my favorite author gave me a review, saying that they are enjoying a story of mine!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 10:29 AM Title: Chapter II: Countryside

Great start I'm really looking forward to what happens next. I love the idea of a space traveler guiliver type women. An I like the size difference as well. Just hope she will learn their language(but that is a nice touch that they would speak different languages).

aaron
PS hope that she will(or the little ones) wash her feet cause they gotta be filthy. Lol

Author's Response:

Don't worry, she's going to learn their language soon. But that doesn't mean that it might take some time. ;)

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!

Seems like a fun premise.  Gulliver's Travels in space, it feels like.  I'm always intrigued when I see writers having a go at a first person perspective from the eyes of the giantess character, as I personally find the tone much more difficult to maintain than that of the tiny character.  Good luck to you in continuing.



Author's Response:

I was inspired by recently rereading Gulliver's Travels, and oddly enough, 2010: Odyssey Two by Arthur C. Clarke. I hope to write this like a story, not the usual 'sex and slavery' stuff we see on the site mostly.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!

"Et usu weu, Alctopi!", and make it snappy!



Author's Response:

Uen ibed Odengut, Wildcatman!

In other words, Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!

Interesting premise, not really much more I can say about it, at this this point.



Author's Response:

Kind of like Gulliver's Travels. Kind of.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!

I havw a feeling I will really enjoy this story, although it's probably too early to say for sure.



Author's Response:

I'm going to try to keep it a story, not veering off jnto erotica and stuff like that.

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