Date: July 04 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter VI: Friend In Need
I absolutely love the story and the idea of a person from Earth coming to a world of tiny people. I love the style of writing, and the plot twist about Carn and Alin is really keeping me interested. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Oh, we've still got one more VIP to introduce. And he's my favorite character!
Just have to wait!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
Easily one of my favorite stories on this site. There are really not enough of this quality. Keep it up; you are writing wonderfully.
Author's Response:
Saf, author of stainless, well...
Thanks! I'll keep it up!
Date: July 01 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter VI: Friend In Need
Is there a secret meaning in this chapter? It seems like Cathy would be an excellent hostage in the matter of controlling Amanda
Author's Response:
I'll answer honestly.
Nope. I'm really not trying to put little 'hidden foreshadowing secrets' into the story. So disregard anything you read that may seem like a foreshadow.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
Execute, a 400 foot tall woman......yeah-right....
Glad your continuing this, really great plot-building, and discriptions too.
Can't wait for next chapter, DUDE!
Author's Response:
Tiny men have devious ideas... Amanda doesn't know it yet, but she might actually be in trouble... Or is she?
Date: May 16 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
it looks like you've put quite a bit of thought into this story, and what mean by that is primarly to do with explaining the language barriers, and if course other little details.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
Nice to see you back. An this story too.
Can't wait to see the revolution as well as the sergeant and carn plan that involves taking out the giantess for their plans to work. And them being friends was a very nice touch.
aaron
Date: May 13 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
Well well, that IS an interesting development. >w> I haven't seen many stories where the tinies in the story are as devious as Alin and Carn. One befriends her, the other makes her his "enemy", and they both plot her downfall. I like where this is going, and while I hope Amanda gets through it without much trouble, I also hope she remains benevolent towards those who haven't caused and do not wish her harm.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
I love it! Can't wait to see her play some more with the people - and I see where You are going with the PRR, but she does not need to be very cruel with them or anything - four hundred feet tall is a huge difference to scare them off (at least one third of a million times more massive?).
Also - would love to see more details about how the people feel about her power over them, how she humbles them.
Otherwise all great and can't wait for the next chapter! I found the concerned gentleness greatly relaxing when I needed a break or was stuck :)
Regards, Gerald.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! It's always great to receive input on how others view my stories than "Well Done" or such. I haven't given any of my stories much thought for the past month so who knows where I'm going...
ANYWAY, I am happy and hope you continue to read.
Sincerely, DMG
[Report This]Date: May 13 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter V: Escorts
I am glad to hear that you haven't died. hope to see more updates from you soon. :D
Author's Response:
I hope to keep it that way. On both conditions.
[Report This]Date: March 25 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter II: Countryside
Dudemanguy I must know your secret for writing so quickly I swear in the time it takes me to write a chapter you could write a whole damn story lol
And once again I gotta say dude your writtings solid keep it up
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks! I guess practice makes perfect, right?
Just keep on doin it man.
Date: March 24 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter IV: Language
I see you are trying to make this story very believable. Not many people think about language barriers. In fact, not many people on here think about a lot of things. Oh well. This is turning out to be a very nice read, which I think I may have already said in a previous review but it's been a long time as you say in the chapter notes - and I can't be bothered to check my reviews to previous chapters.
Author's Response:
You're right, I am trying to make this believable. Gee, how did you figure that one out? (Lol)
And lol to the "Not many people here think about a lot of things" comment. Most of us are just a bunch of giantess ravers, am I right?
It makes me sleep better at night, knowing you are really enjoying this story Stub.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2013 4:07 PM Title: Chapter IV: Language
The tallest lady in Actipol. " It seemed she could feel my fear, and smiled softly..."
I like that. "She looked at me and I flinched in fear." Just adds enough, to give the reader a sense of the impression of her incredable appearance, without too-much discription to be concidered 'Over-Kill'.
Malaki will have his hands full with this "Student", Ha! Great Job, DUDE!
Author's Response:
Thanks Cat! I knew you would like it!
Date: February 25 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
I would just like to say that I would have strongly preferred if her size would have been measured in miles rather than feet. Feet suck.
Author's Response:
Lol, if she was miles tall, how would she interact with all the tiny people? (Other than stepping on them of course.)
Thanks for the review Chozo! Never expected one from you. It's kinda cool that the older authors are starting to take an interest in this. You, Pixis, Malaka, sheesh who next?
But anyway, thanks for reviewing! (Sorry she couldn't be a couple miles tall, the plot clearly stipulates 400 feet and I can't stray away from the plotline can I?)
Date: February 23 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
I really like the style of this story,it is paced really evenly. The plot also makes sense and there isn't any senseless violence which really fits the characters.
Author's Response:
Thanks a whole bunch! I'm trying to really flesh out the main characters, and make a plot line because a story like this definitely needs one.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter III: Record 1
I liked it very much so. Hope carn can teach her their language an fast.. That emperor needs to be talk a giantess kinda lesson.
aaron
Author's Response:
A giantess kind of lesson lol aaron. It may not be Carn who teaches her their language, but I'm getting there. Should be about a chapter or 2.
Date: February 23 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter III: Record 1
RHere:
one of the most fair in all the land I would most definitely dispute with anyone who dared say otherwise
You should add in an "and" or after land add a full stop.
And yes, do like it. The in perpective was unexpected, and actually like it. Mostly can't d it well mainly because it's too frequent or have many time skips.
Author's Response:
There's the Stubby I know! Did you have a little trouble typing at the end of this review? It was kinda hard to understand, but I think you said that you liked it.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter III: Record 1
Like IT! Hell yea! Superb work, Dudeman! Jonathan Swift would say that your quite the satirical poet.....
Definately, keep this going, I can't wait to see what happens next...
You got a 'Knack' for this I believe, the style of writing seems natural for you? Maybe?
I think so! Anyway good job!
Author's Response:
This definitely has seemed easier for me than other works. Glad you like this Cat!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter I: Crashed!
This is cool, Im starting to take a liking to it, where before I was kind of uninterested. Its still too early for me to fully decide if I like this or not but its good do far.
Author's Response:
Aye, it is slow moving. But hey, I like to write it. Glad you are starting to take a liking to this.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter III: Record 1
I never usually like this type of story but you seemed to have really got a good handle on things, perhaps more interaction between the people and Amanda but so far so good, keep it up!
Author's Response:
I too am never usually into something like this, but it's actually a lot of fun to write. And don't worry, I hope to have a lot more interaction between the 2 sides in about 2 chapters.
Date: February 21 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter II: Countryside
That was a wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
Glad I could please. It's rare that Stubbornstain says a chapter was wonderful, so this high praise is very refreshing to hear and encourages me to write more. Hope you enjoy any future chapters of mine!