[Report This]Date: March 11 2013 8:33 PM Title: Ch. 20 The Dungeon
Lucky... Is he lucky to be arrested, and 6 inches tall? But is Cindy any better? Questions, questions...
I like this story. A lot. And it doesn't even seem close to ending.
Author's Response:
Thanks DUDE! I always look forward to your reviews, and NO, it's not even Close, to the middle yet....Heh, heh, heh....
Date: March 09 2013 7:56 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Thanks for the reviews! I corrected the mistake, in this Chapter. The names of Cindy and Linda got misplaced.... I'll be extra deligent from now on.....
Thanks CaryComic, and Maximus, I would have never noticed that without your pointing it out, MUCH Apprecieated.....
Keep reviewing I'm getting a little better each day, and I hope that your enjoying this as much as I am writing it......
This is so cool, it's like having a professional editing Team, I love it! I'm learning alot, and improving so much, and I only have you guys to thank....
Author's Response:
I had to delete the chapter, to replace-it with the corrected version, (Reviews got deleted too) That's the only way that I know to correct it, without messing something else up.....
Date: March 07 2013 4:13 PM Title: Ch. 23 Strapped
I have a feeling Tom will return to usual size very shortly. I think that's a nice aspect of the story. His abusers think that they have complete control and then...BAM! And the tables suddenly turn.
Author's Response:
So I take it that you liked the 'Reverse Slam', Chapter? Ha) BAM!!!
Thanks, Stubby!
Date: March 07 2013 3:59 PM Title: Ch. 22 Jaclyn's Trampoline
The trampoline scene was curious because I didn't think it was possible to do that with a skirt. It's creative though, but I think Tom might be too heavy and/or the skirt not elastic enough.
Date: March 07 2013 3:42 PM Title: Ch. 20 The Dungeon
I hope the police do find Tom. He will be better off with them, and then a media frenzy will ensue given his new size, one assumes.
Here:
into shear maddness
You mean sheer. A shear is used for cutting things.
Author's Response:
Better off with the police, .....Media frenzy, Oh, Noooo,.....He could never get that lucky! Heh,Heh,Heh
[Report This]Date: March 06 2013 11:33 PM Title: Ch. 23 Strapped
I thought for sure she was doing that to get him to tell her how he shrunk, I bet he would have sang like a bird! Thrilling chapter, Cindy turned it up a notch!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Tom's getting weaker, and weaker,....and the ladies,....well, their getting a little more casual....
[Report This]Date: March 05 2013 7:03 PM Title: Ch. 23 Strapped
Love it! It's so believable! I still wonder what Sarah's doing...
Author's Response:
Thanks, DUDE!
Sarah's coming up, in about 3 more chapters.....
[Report This]Date: March 03 2013 4:49 PM Title: Ch. 22 Jaclyn's Trampoline
Can I play on Jackies trampoline??? Creative, I haven't seen that done before, just another example of how easily they control him, I love that!
Author's Response:
Yeah, the simple pleasure's are always the best! Just making it realistic, is the difficult part.......
When the giantess has complete control, and her imagination is limitless, and her childlike curiousity takes over????
I love that, Too! Thanks Max!
[Report This]Date: March 02 2013 9:58 PM Title: Ch. 22 Jaclyn's Trampoline
Jackie's definitely one dominating giantess. But what's Sarah doing? Is she still trying to rescue Tom?
Author's Response:
Sarah is hanging around somewhere....
[Report This]Date: March 02 2013 1:36 AM Title: Ch. 21 Jackie's Foot Rub
Great chapters! The ass scene in the Dungeon was awesome and Jackies use of him on her foot this chapter was hot!
I have a suggestion though, it may just be me but I find the use of the adjectives "rubbery and leathery" to desrcibe the giantesses skin distracting. Why would it be rubbery, are they amputees??? I always find womens skin to be very soft, I don't think at a reduced size that would change to rubbery or leathery. I would think it would be something like "the soft pads of her fingers wrapped around his body". Just my two cents.
Great story, looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I 'used', rubbery, and leathery- to set-up an image of the "middle-aged"-woman/ then, when switched to her daughter there would be some 'Softernessssss"..... A little 'contrast', there, but, maybe your right...., it wouldn't be so much differance, but I thought I'd try that just leading up....
Much more, on the way,.....Thanks Max!
Date: March 01 2013 1:29 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Great chapters man. Yeah I was unsure of the direction earlier- my bad. I definitely like Jackie. On another note you're a prodigious author. It takes dedication to consistently produce chapters, as the number of unfinished stories on the site prove.
Author's Response:
Thank's Draftsmsan! Yea, Jackie's a naughty giantess..../ Oh, it is time comsuming, but I cant work much this time of year, so I'll be writeing pretty often untill the weather breaks...... Hopefully, I'll get it finished!!
Thank's again!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2013 7:25 PM Title: Ch. 21 Jackie's Foot Rub
Woot Jackie, she seems to have got the domineering part down pretty well. Cindy too, although she's a bit more forceful.
Author's Response:
Like Mother,...Like Daughter!
Date: February 28 2013 8:38 AM Title: Ch. 20 The Dungeon
Great chapters, I am glad you added the v/s since it does get graphic. That is just what I like. I also like how they try to fight not to kill tom. Can't wait for the next wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks Zephilia, It's just gonna keep on gettin better!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2013 6:27 AM Title: Ch. 20 The Dungeon
Oh come on, now he's a fugitive? Fucken police.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2013 12:40 AM Title: Ch. 19 Cynthia
Now that's more like it! Sorry for ever doubting you, gentle stuff just makes me grumpy! Thanks for the explanation as to why you had Wendy fall in love with him.
Author's Response:
I can understand what you were thinkin', Wendy's dominating first impression had you caught-up, but- I had to figure out a way to form a situation that would involve the entire 'COVEN' of ladie's that were in the book club. Secondly, but perhaps most importantly, trap Tom in his shrunken state, and keep him at their mercy....
[Report This]Date: February 25 2013 2:46 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I like Cindy's character. She's the 'casual' dominating giantess. Not too many of those. Most like to just get to the nitty gritty almost immediately.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's "Casual", she likes to casually 'CRUSH'...
Date: February 24 2013 10:45 AM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
Well, guess I'll have to find a new character to like, you killed Wendy for me. Not only did you turn her into a sappy gooey love struck girl, you threw in the animal torture stuff. Sorry but I've seen too much of that in real life, just kills the vibe for me when I see it in a story. The reason I can get behind the whole dominating mistreatment of the shrunken guys is because it's not real on any level, total fabrication, there's no tiny guy anywhere in the world being victimized. Even I have limits on that though, I don’t get into the gory or heavy torture stuff. I don't know why you changed her character anyway, if I have one critique of you, it's that you are all over the map with your characters. You already had the nice loving giantess in Sarah, don't know why you felt the need to do that with Wendy too (even know she is unstable and could revert back) but she was perfect as the dominating giantess who so easily enslaved Toms mind in their first encounter, you totally abandoned that story line, I thought we were going to see a lot of that type of slave interaction between her and Tom. If you wanted another gentle character, you should have just introduced a new one, you're good at inventing giantesses. Your readers aren’t going to all like the same things, so they should be able to have certain parts of the story or characters that they can look forward to. Oh well, maybe Sandy will get her hands on him, I don’t think she would fall in love with him.
Author's Response:
Without Angering the Goddess 'Pandora', I've thrown Tom into her box.... Linda own's him now, and Wendy has ' locked-him-in', with her twisted love. He can't escape being 'miniature-sized', as long as she is in love with him...
The incremental, decremation, is slowly desending into the depths of servatude, and domination....
Linda, (his owner/Mistress) has dominated him, ultimatly, by casually renting him out. The plaything that he has become is about to be subjected to everything on the scale.
His only hope, is Sarah, and she just got a pile of cold, hard, cash! Don't rush it, Max,... Wendy's not done yet!
Date: February 24 2013 9:53 AM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
That was a nice chapter. I didn't expect Wendy to turn out nice.
Here:
"WHY, am I being 'put', THREW this!"
You mean through. You only use threw when something is thrown, like a ball.
Author's Response:
Thanks Stubby! Glad you liked it!
Strange, how 'one' word, can change the entire meaning of everything.....
I'm working on my spelling and it's a constant fight(Ha) . Having just returned to writing, after a decade-long dry spell, it's become a little rusty!
Glad you pointed that out though, keep it up. I always look forward to your reviews!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 11:24 PM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
First sorry I dont review every ch. but if I did all I would say is I LOVE THIS STORY!
Im glad u update regularly, this is becoming a favorite of mine. FEED ME MORE!
Author's Response:
Thanks, more is on the way.....
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 10:32 PM Title: Ch. 18 A different Wendy
Things are getting interesting. Great chapter! I think I am liking Wendy as my favorite character. I really like how you described her personality, being mean for a while but now she is showing a loving side to her. Very well done!! Hope Tom gets back with Wendy.
I saw that hint at the end of the chapter, Cindy's daughter, a new giantess introduced? Wonder what will happen next?
Author's Response:
Thanks! 'The Decrement' continues.....