[Report This]Date: March 24 2013 10:30 PM Title: Ch. 30 Wendy's World
Yup, Wendys in charge all right! Things are about to get real fun. Wonder if Sarah will end up in Wendys belly or maybe Tweakers? Now I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep em coming, awesome story!
Author's Response:
Thanks Max! Twila's, (aka: Tweaker) a naughty little minx, and she's got her own bag of tricks in store.....
Although, I think were done feeding the snake. {{{(That just made my skin crawl!)}}}
Date: March 24 2013 6:42 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I guess that "love" thing that is needed for the powder to work its magic is out the window at this point, eh wildcat? Not that it matters much, but Im kind of OCD about little inconsistencies, especially in a story I like.
Author's Response:
Wendy forced Cindy and her daughter,( who 'Love' one another) to kiss, after pouring the powder on both of them, BINGO they both shrank.
Also, Sarah and Hailey, (sisters) same thing, both of them shrank, after kissing, I guess I thought that most readers would solve that little mystery without any explaination, sorry about that.....
[Report This]Date: March 23 2013 2:01 PM Title: Ch. 30 Wendy's World
I don't like Wendy.
Author's Response:
Aww, come on Wendy has been a 'good-girl', up untill NOW!
[Report This]Date: March 21 2013 9:08 PM Title: Ch. 29 Powder Rush
Wow! Wendys world now. Wonder how she got the upper hand? She's going to have a lot of fun now! Don't think I have forgotten the 2 packets Sarah kept though.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2013 12:23 AM Title: Ch. 29 Powder Rush
Awe man! Just when I was liking Wendy's new self...
Anyways, great stuff, doing a real good job
[Report This]Date: March 20 2013 8:55 PM Title: Ch. 29 Powder Rush
Ohhh boy, this chapter was the hardest for me to stomach. Uggh, I just kept on hating Wendy throughout it. Damn, I hope she gets her due soon.
Author's Response:
Wendy's got it in the *Bag*, now......(or, cage?) Wha-ha!, Ha,ha,ha,ha,ha.......
[Report This]Date: March 20 2013 8:06 PM Title: Ch. 29 Powder Rush
can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Lots more on the way......
[Report This]Date: March 19 2013 11:37 PM Title: Ch. 28 Mike's Final moment
Thanks wildcat! Mikes life really came to an "end" Great job! Now we get to see if Jackie gets a toy of her own and what becomes of Tom. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Just a hint, watch out for WENDY!
Date: March 18 2013 9:59 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I thought the powder only worked on someone you loved? Cindy just killed him for her pleasure, did she actually love him?
Author's Response:
Hey Gadget, Yea, in her "Way", she did actually love Mike, and Mike loved her too! (A little too-Much) :'(
[Report This]Date: March 18 2013 8:42 PM Title: Ch. 28 Mike's Final moment
Short.
But so...Beautiful... (wipes a tear away)
Sorry, I'm a bit emotional right now...
PS, just about to update a story of mine! Please review?
Author's Response:
Yea, I would have liked to made this, (chapter), the end of the previous one, but Oh,Well...
Be right over, DUDE! ( Bout time U updated!) *'{)
Date: March 18 2013 12:04 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Ouch, poor Mike. Tom too, hope he doesn't die. But a lifetime of servitude seems in order-
Author's Response:
Thanks! ':{) GMD, Tom's life is no longer his own, he's just a toy now. ... a toy for a group of horny girls, could life get any better? :'(
[Report This]Date: March 17 2013 1:06 AM Title: Ch. 27 Bath-Time Con't.
Told you Mike wasn't going to have a long part in this story! Do you think you could pick up the next chapter from Mikes perspective? Great chapter! Looking forward to seeing how things unfold with Sarah too.
Author's Response:
Great Idea Max, The next Chapter will be a recap of Mike's part, totally from his perspective. I thought about that before, but had a really 'good' Idea for the return of Sara, and I kinda jumped the gun, there....Thanks for pulling me back, I still have to 'slow' myself down, and relax a bit,,, Ha ;)
Thanks Max!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2013 10:35 PM Title: Ch. 27 Bath-Time Con't.
See? I called bullshit, and bullshit happened.
Author's Response:
No, I believe it's called Giantess (sh**)!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2013 4:27 PM Title: Ch. 26 Bath-Time
Awesome dude! More please
[Report This]Date: March 16 2013 12:22 AM Title: Ch. 26 Bath-Time
"I wont hurt you"
She better!
And I like that Jackie is going to get a toy of her own, at least I hope she does. Oh, and I vote nay for feeding Mike to her snake, feed him to her pussy instead!
Date: March 15 2013 9:03 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Can't wait to see what happens to Mike, hoping that she feeds him to her snake
[Report This]Date: March 15 2013 6:11 PM Title: Ch. 26 Bath-Time
"I'm not going to hurt you"
Bullshit.
Date: March 13 2013 3:16 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Okay, seriously the best author on this site. Nice work.
Also...please add to the other story you have going.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Ontheroad! Much flattered by your comment... However, you must be new to this site? May I suggest reading some work from, 'Cayce' or 'Jacksmith' or UHF, or tinyone234, there are some amazing Authors on this site that are much more advanced than I....
* Yes, I'll be adding to 'Taylor's New Toy', in the near future, and again, thanks for the compliment!
[Report This]Date: March 11 2013 8:33 PM Title: Ch. 20 The Dungeon
Lucky... Is he lucky to be arrested, and 6 inches tall? But is Cindy any better? Questions, questions...
I like this story. A lot. And it doesn't even seem close to ending.
Author's Response:
Thanks DUDE! I always look forward to your reviews, and NO, it's not even Close, to the middle yet....Heh, heh, heh....
Date: March 09 2013 7:56 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Thanks for the reviews! I corrected the mistake, in this Chapter. The names of Cindy and Linda got misplaced.... I'll be extra deligent from now on.....
Thanks CaryComic, and Maximus, I would have never noticed that without your pointing it out, MUCH Apprecieated.....
Keep reviewing I'm getting a little better each day, and I hope that your enjoying this as much as I am writing it......
This is so cool, it's like having a professional editing Team, I love it! I'm learning alot, and improving so much, and I only have you guys to thank....
Author's Response:
I had to delete the chapter, to replace-it with the corrected version, (Reviews got deleted too) That's the only way that I know to correct it, without messing something else up.....