[Report This]Date: January 29 2013 7:09 PM Title: Ch. 4 'The slippie-slide'
Aha, let's see where this relationship goes. And let's see what the woman of blonde does to mess it up.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 11:44 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Oops, forgot to rate!
Date: January 28 2013 11:43 PM Title: Ch. 3 'Hailey'
Hey you're back, thought you took your toys and went home, all your stories are gone. Good to see you writing again, like this new story as well. Always like the casual handling of the tinies in your stories.
Author's Response:
Yeah, gonna do some editing on the others, and repost them , later.. Almost finished with the revised version of 'The Shack' should be done in about a week or so, not sure yet. P.S. your gonna love the new ending....
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 9:11 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Ohh, poor Tom. Little Hailey's gonna give it to him now. I do wonder where you are going with this story. I really am interested.
Author's Response:
Read on, my friend, Read-on.....
[Report This]Date: January 25 2013 4:54 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Cat, your back! And it seems like a gentle story to me! Hehe, doesn't matter if it IS gentle, because it's your story! But it's a bonus that it is gentle! Gonna keep up with this one!
Author's Response:
Thanks Dude, yeah, I hope to keep this one going.
Date: January 25 2013 4:11 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I must say, you're writing style is unique. It's a good story so far, with background buildup of the characters. I just noticed some random capitalization in places. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you like it, I don't edit my work very good, I just kinda free write as it comes off the top of my head. So, yeah, I do get a Cap., here and there,... Oh, well, I keep trying to improve....