[Report This]Date: February 04 2013 11:29 PM Title: Ch.7 'Sarah' cont.'
Loved the foot scene! Love how a simple act of just placing her foot onto him can totally domiante and smother him. Great mouth scene too, wish she did eat him! lol, of course the story would be over then and that would be bad.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2013 8:57 PM Title: Ch. 8 'Wendy'
Tom is screwed.
Date: February 04 2013 5:59 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I know what you mean. I'm a spelling nazi, and sometimes, I almost go and email the author to put me as coauthor so I can rip apart the story to fix it. But I don't leave it in a review unless it's absolutely horrid. And I didn't mean to sound so harsh, just saying that multiple reviews saying this and that needs to be fixed is a little overwhelming, don't you think?
And did you actually say lol?
Date: February 04 2013 5:55 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Lol, Dudemanguy, it's because I'm stubborn. I also want to help people. People can do the same to my stories (or more likley my reviews which I don't proofread), no problem. I am enjoying the story, yes but it's a habit I've developed. My apologies Wildcatman for being so pedantic.
[Report This]Date: February 04 2013 4:33 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Damn stubborn, why can't you just enjoy the story? All these piddly errors don't mean anything as long as you like the story.
Date: February 04 2013 8:39 AM Title: Ch.7 'Sarah' cont.'
Here:
"Tommy, please dear, don't be mad at me...." "I didn't mean to hurt you, please, forgive me!"
I don't think ther is a need for the speech marks between the setences.
And here:
Her emence breath
You mean immense.
She doens't want him to be mad and yet she does the thing with whipped cream. Seems rather odd.
Date: February 04 2013 8:24 AM Title: Ch. 6 'Sara', con't.
Here:
literally 'Exsplode'!
It's Explode. And here:
she exsclaimed
It's exclaimed.
Sara is a bit cynical because she told her sister not to hurt him and yet she is. She needs to be setting the example.
Date: February 04 2013 3:48 AM Title: Ch. 5 'Sara'
Here:
she was able to see the exstream
You mean extreme.
I personally feel it's a bit too soon for them to get intimate like this, but eh, it's your story.
Date: February 04 2013 3:35 AM Title: Ch. 4 'The slippie-slide'
Here:
suspiciousness of that vehical.
You mean vehicle.
Tom should have gone back home. They're bound to find him eventually.
Date: February 04 2013 3:27 AM Title: Ch. 3 'Hailey'
Surely Tom could have just gone back home, and perhaps buy a new home. What he did wasn't that bad, was it? It's a good story so far nonetheless and I wonder if he will ever turn back to normal size.
Date: February 04 2013 3:13 AM Title: Ch 2. A New Perspective
I feel sorry for Tom even though he's only a character in a story. I don't think Haily is at an age to think sexual thoughts. She's too focused on her dolls. Sara will not be happy with her...
Date: February 04 2013 2:50 AM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
I('s a good start! I should have checked this story sooner. My only concern is the amount of time skips and the heavy reliance on them. Then again, I understand you want to get to the good bits of the story. It's good there was some build up although ideadly there could have been a bit more. I'm gonna keep my review short because I can't wait to see the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2013 9:43 PM Title: Ch.7 'Sarah' cont.'
Oh Tom, why do you always trust the woman? They always turn on you, sooner or later. Just give it some time... it'll come sooner or later. Then Sara's just another one of 'them'. All in good time...
Another excellent chapter.
Date: February 03 2013 5:59 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
New chapter was great although Im seeing that Tom is starting to get scared of her and for good reason!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2013 7:01 AM Title: Ch. 6 'Sara', con't.
I like it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 11:19 PM Title: Ch. 6 'Sara', con't.
This story is awesome, wildcat, great job! The way your giantess treat the little guys is perfect, you nail the whole helpless toy aspect, how the giantess can just lose themselves and go wherever their lust takes them, fantastic stuff! And definitley continue! Also looking forward to the edited Shack version.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Max, glad your into it,.. I decided to just let this little fling carrie-on for a while, slow it down a bit, and just let Sara have her own way, for a change....
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 5:37 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
Chapter 6 was AMAZING, wildcat! I wasn't sure about this story until I read THAT chapter...Then I was like, "good to see the old wildcat."
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 4:51 PM Title: Ch. 6 'Sara', con't.
Hmm, Toy. A revelation that certainly fits this chapter. Not the way I would have taken, but actually could end up very nicely if 'spun' the right way. And as for Tom... His reaction is going to be fun to see. Let's see what relationships come out of this "deep" interaction.
Why are you even thinking about stopping? Just keep on writing. Take it slow and smooth. Don't take this one down too! I'm really enjoying it!
Author's Response:
Not the way you would have taken? What 'Way', would you 'take'? Dudemanguy, Ha,Ha,ha... I'm open 4 suggestions here! In fact I love hearing what you would like to see happen next, or what should have happened, or what could have happened.... This is always the point where I stall-out, and slow down, I could use some input right now, ...... Anything you got would be apreceated!!!
Date: January 30 2013 9:00 PM Title: Ch 1 The Powder
This is pretty, good, Im not going to make a final decision yet till you write a bit more, but its getting interesting.
PS. Jeez, wildcat, you really like getting rid of your old stories.
Author's Response:
I'm my biggest worst 'critic'. The other storys are being reworked, and I'm hoping that they be even better, glad you like this one, I'll try and keep from deleting it......
[Report This]Date: January 30 2013 3:41 PM Title: Ch. 5 'Sara'
Doesn't seem hot enough to me. Maybe we could, turn up the heat even further, (if ya catch my drift?)
Author's Response:
It's a gettin' pretty heated, but-I'll see what I can do......