Date: November 08 2014 3:56 AM Title: Ch. 41 Swimming Lesson
Very nice story. Well done characters. Looking forward to more.question, will Linda be back in the story. She is my favorite. Maybe add in some high heels. Maybe someone beating their fists on the side of her shoes to get her attention. Excellent writing skills and so many different stories within the story.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2013 8:59 PM Title: Ch. 41 Swimming Lesson
Great to see this back! Loved this chapter, my favorite scenario, a tiny being used sexually with reckless abandon :)
Hailey might be in trouble too, Mindy might just have gotten a taste for missbehaving.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2013 3:48 PM Title: Ch. 41 Swimming Lesson
This is definitely the least fun chapter...for the characters and this reader. :-(
[Report This]Date: July 26 2013 5:06 AM Title: Ch. 40 Attack of the 50 ft. Beach Babe's
I had a lot of fun reading this story.
Although this sequence of events: the almost continuous torture and sexual abuse is not really what I am looking for... I must admit this actually was sort of a guilty pleasure for me.
You introduced some nice plot twists, although sometimes a bit confusing. And you kept it very fresh by introducing different characters in little side events. While the main storyline is captivating. I like the protagonist, Tom. He is (was) a hard working carpenter, a really nice guy. I really empathise with him, and what he has to endure.
I also find it very great that you spared Hailey.
Sorry that I can't go indepth on this story. This review is retroactive. I read this many weeks ago before I was a member on this site. But when I started reading I read from chapter 1 to 40 without a break (except for when real life called me).
Great work.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2013 3:11 PM Title: Ch. 40 Attack of the 50 ft. Beach Babe's
Great new chapter, love how the story is progressing. I just hope that Sara gets Tom and has some more wild adventures with him. But I like the story none the less.
[Report This]Date: May 29 2013 3:42 PM Title: Ch. 39 Aggie Close's-in on Tom
Surrounded by a giant group of girls, Sam is really in for quite an experience. Wonder if Tweaker will manage to break free?
At least Hailey is treated kindly, I really like how through this situation, Hailey and Mindy had formed a very friendly bond.
Keep up the good work, this story is getting more interesting!!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2013 10:43 AM Title: Ch. 38 Mindy's New Friend
Great new chapter, I realyy hope for a happy ending for Sara and her daughter.
Date: May 25 2013 9:06 PM Title: Ch. 37 Day at the Beach
Wonder what Twila will decide. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks Zeph, Twila's a very Naughty-girl!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2013 8:39 PM Title: Ch. 36 Tiny Toy's
I love the evil Kelly but I hope Sara is made big again and gets an evil attitude. I just loved her as a giantess.
Author's Response:
Time will tell..... heh,heh,heh,heh.....
[Report This]Date: May 05 2013 11:20 PM Title: Ch. 35 'Kelly'
Loved loved loved the thigh scene, wow! I guess along with Toms body shrinking so did his intelligence, good plan Tom, duh, glad he did it though, gave Kelly a reason to punish him, hehehee. Probably not a good idea by Sara either, that could have serious consequences, cant wait to see it!
Author's Response:
Thanks Max! Yeah, I think you might 'really' like Mistress Kelly, she's gonna put both of her tiny 'pet's' through it......;`)
[Report This]Date: May 04 2013 10:29 AM Title: Ch. 35 'Kelly'
I hoppe the entire story has a happy ending for sara not tom.
Author's Response:
Zeph! Now, what did Tom ever do to 'You'? ;`)
[Report This]Date: April 27 2013 5:25 PM Title: Ch. 34 Tweaker Takes Over
Love the story, just read it the entire thing. I hope Sara and her sister become huge again and get their revenge while Tom remains small and becomes saras plaything.
Author's Response:
Thanks Zeph! Yeah, You might not be too far off base on that.....
[Report This]Date: April 13 2013 6:49 AM Title: Ch. 34 Tweaker Takes Over
Interesting turn of events, great job. Hope to see next chapter soon, keep up your good work
Author's Response:
Thanks Pasret4, I'm a little slower to post, now. Less free time to write during this time of year, (have to work alot more) but, I'll post as often as I can...
[Report This]Date: April 07 2013 12:37 AM Title: Ch. 33 Tweaker's Plaything
I want to be Twilas plaything! Wow, great stuff, I see Tommy boy and these new toys are in for some rough times!
Author's Response:
Thanks man, it's nearing the end though....
[Report This]Date: April 04 2013 2:33 PM Title: Ch. 33 Tweaker's Plaything
Hehe, Tweaker's got Tom now. I'm surprised he's still alive!
Author's Response:
He's hangin' in there, Dude.....barely!
Date: April 01 2013 12:21 AM Title: Ch. 32 Lollie Pop Tom 'con't'
This should be interesting. The last few chapters were not formulaic, starting with Wendy taking over. She's my favorite character so far. Too bad Cindy won't be coming back; Her and Jaclyn's escapades with Jack were entertaining. Are we still going to see the rest of Linda's friends?
Author's Response:
Thanks Draftsman! Yeah, the old Wendy's Back! Wha-Ha, ha,ha,ha,ha,.....
Linda's 'Friend's? Hmm, maybe, Maybe not...stay tuned, for the following chapters.....
[Report This]Date: March 27 2013 12:02 AM Title: Ch. 32 Lollie Pop Tom 'con't'
Great stuff! But here's my counter ending to dudes:
Toms is Wendys slave forever or until she tires of him.
Jackie ends up in Wendy or Twilas stomach or one of the other book members belly, otherwise she is going to grow back without her mothers love anymore right?
Likewise, Sarah and Halley have to stay together or will grow back, Halley throws a wrench into things, she's to young so don't want her involved in any of the action or anyting bad to happen to her. Maybe she has a "freind" her age Wendy can give her and Sarah to. It will be innocent fun and games until she becomes of age muwhahaha.
Wendy uses some of the remaining powder to acquire more toys.
Now that's sound advice! We'll see if I guessed any of it right.
Author's Response:
I like your ending "A-LOT", better! (But, you already knew that I would, didn't ya?) Ha.. ';`)
Yeah, your right about Jackie,......I'll give ya that much.....
[Report This]Date: March 26 2013 11:14 PM Title: Ch. 32 Lollie Pop Tom 'con't'
Tom's just gettin screwed left and right, isn't he?
Author's Response:
Wait untill Aggie shows up too!
[Report This]Date: March 26 2013 10:37 PM Title: Ch. 32 Lollie Pop Tom 'con't'
Isn't Wendy gonna ever go back to her good side?
Author's Response:
Yeah, she changes whenever the wind blows. She's just an excitable girl, and she loves being a Giantess!
[Report This]Date: March 26 2013 6:33 PM Title: Ch. 31 Lolli-Pop Tom
Right now i'm just like -_-.
Dudemanguy's ending:
Tom becomes normal sized, and wallops Wendy. Sarah, Hailey, and Jaclyn return to normal. But Tom shrinks once more and lives with Sarah.
The End.
This is sound advice XD.
But good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks Dude! The chapter got cut-off, and didn't completely up-load! Happened to me AGAIN! I'm working on the rest of it now, maybe get it fixed and shoot out another chapter here shortly, I Hope.....
I like your ending, but that wouldn't be very exciting though, would it? Ha ;{)