Date: September 19 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
That Chloe chick is hot. I’m interested to see what she would do if she ever discovered her brother and friends at ½ inch tall. Is she the bitchy older sister that would torment her brother? Is she the caring ‘I got your back’ older sister? What about his friends? Would she extend her kindness to her shrunken brother’s friends? Or would she shove everyone in her pussy with the crushed freshie?
There are a lot of ways you could go with this story. The freshmen cheerleaders are going to have a lot of fun, that’s a given. But the adventurous friends are going to have to deal with Chloe. That’s where the real question comes in—how will she react?
How about, Chloe acts like a hard-ass around her friends, but then she’s privately gentle with the four friends? What if the four friends have to prove to Chloe that they are worthy to be restored? What if Chloe gets shrunked!?
Okay, I’m rambling. My red wine is kinda strong. I’ve been following your story since I discovered it, youlooktasty. Keep up the great work and don’t let the story die!
[Report This]Date: September 05 2013 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Rachel is shallow. Just getting over her old boyfriend, and onto a new one. She should be shot.
Or eaten. Whichever one
[Report This]Date: August 25 2013 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Number 1 story on this website!
[Report This]Date: July 08 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Truly the best story ive ever read on this site! but you should add more to the end
Date: July 07 2013 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm happy to see this story is still alive. I'm liking this adventure the the three students are going through. Keep up with the malevolence and such :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the continued support, Gadget. It seemed like it was on an IV drip there for quite a while, but the giantess has finally been released from the hospital and received the go-ahead from her doctor that she can resume her normal diet of tiny people:)
[Report This]Date: July 06 2013 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good to see you back!
And I don't like Rachel, dream or not. Like she actually cares what happens to him.
Author's Response: Is it because she seems too shallow, or something else? Please let me know, I am always a bit worried that my character skills aren't as good as they should be, so I crave feedback in those areas. And yeah, it's good to be back.
[Report This]Date: July 05 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
I wonder what happens to these kids if and when they graduate from high school? does the cycle of shrinking and killing just continue throughout college (if they even have colleges) or maybe they get a reward with invicibility for surviving or something.
Also can adults shrink people or do they get that ability taken away from them?
Lastly I was hoping that the main character would take some kind of moral stand against shrinking, but yeah... poor red headed girl.
Awesome story. I am left with so many questions which is a good thing.
Author's Response: I actually have a mini story exploring their lives after graduation planned in this universe if I ever finish this story, but hopefully the upcoming chapters will answer your other questions soon enough. As for when he eats the tiny girl, I was always kind of annoyed in stories where shrinking is commonplace where the main character was the only one who didn't shrink people, with no logical reason except for the 4th wall-breaking one that the author wanted to avoid the over-dramatized M/f taboo. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is most definitely on my top 5 faves list for 2013.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it so far. Hope they can trust the sister! You never can tell with those cheerleading types.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey man, great chapter! I really enjoy the story and your explanation of how schools came to introducing sizers is tragically awesome. I enjoy the power trips every student seems to succumb to. I like the world-building and encourage you to explore more of the world that surrounds these hapless students. BTW, I didn't see that scene with Celia coming, you had me hoping for her survival along with her! :)
Anyway, in my previous review I called the sizers “porta-sizers” because I've read so many stories in the past that called them that. I guess I wasn't paying to much attention and just assumed they were porta-sizers (portable-sizers). Anyway, good addition and keep up the work and don't be afraid of adding any M/f content. I think you presented them well.
P.S. You made me blush when you said you liked my story. :P
[Report This]Date: February 06 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, vore is my least favorite subject, but I think you just made it really friggin awesome. Extremely well done. I love it!
[Report This]Date: February 06 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
once again an awesome chapter. i enjoyed you explanation of why society turned this way as it adds a bit of background to it. i hope the next chapter has them leaving the bathroom and reentering the world, can't wait to see how they regrow if they do regrow. i would like to know how the group knew that the brooke the shrunken girl was talking about was the same brooke who had tortured them, but it's not really important. anyway, can't wait for the next installment, you are slowly becoming one of my favorite authors!
[Report This]Date: January 30 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just discovered this story. It’s really good, that is I like how the giantess’ are so cold hearted to the underclassmen. The scenarios and situations are fantastic. My only problem would be about the world’s population. If so many freshmen died on their first day, how many would there be when they graduate? How could there be and seniors left when so many die at a whim when they are younger? Is the world—which you created—suffering from hyper-population? Are people born like jack-rabbits, so having so porta-sizers a way of controlling the population?
Like I said, I love the scenarios and situations you wrote. They are perfect! Personally, I would like to see some world-building and explanation to the society’s acceptance of porta-sizers. I love the story and hope to read more. Keep up the great work!!! J
Author's Response: Having one of my favorite authors come knocking with praise in a review is amazing. I normally prefer shrinking to growing to induce size inequality, but your story Love Drugs was a city-destruction piece that I absolutely fell in love with. And if you don't mind my asking, are you telepathic? Because the next chapter is going to feature just the answers you and the others have been asking for! I hope I haven't kept you waiting for it for too long, and that you will review my attempt at world-building. P.S. Since I only call the devices sizers in the story, is there a reason you called them "porta-sizers"? I hope you don't mind my asking, thanks again for letting me read a review from one of my favorite authors!
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
How were you almost 'exposed?' If you don't want to explain it here just send me an email. Or don't tell me at all. I'm just curious...
Author's Response: I sincerely hate denying the mastermind behind some of this site's latest and greatest works, but it's a bit private. I hope you understand.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
o.k., i do have a slight suggestions on how i would love the story to go. i am a HUGE fan of really tiny sizes and the situations which can arise from those tiny sizes- similar to how the girl snorted 40 students up her nose. more stuff like that would be amazing but you can do whatever want really.
Author's Response: Thanks for your willingness to take the time to put up front your thoughts on how you would like it to go. A writer really appreciates that. I can't promise any major micro action real soon, but I will see what I can do.
[Report This]Date: January 23 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
damn, i mean, damn. this story is really good and i just love the concept. you write really well and can really tell a story. pleas continue this as much as you can. i don't have any suggestions because this story is already how i like it- you're that good. well done mate.
Date: January 22 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it. More chapters please!
Date: January 22 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
I very much enjoyed the chapter. The second giantess was an unexpected but very welcome surprise. I thought the the teasing interactions between the giantesses and the tiny couple were very well-written and a nice breath of fresh air, and Brooke trying to force them to have sex in her cleavage was a fantastic idea. So often giantess interaction falls into the same motiveless cliches, but you really brought out a playfully cruel side in Brooke. I also enjoyed the idea of the tiny characters being small enough to explore the bra strap as a ledge: I haven't seen many authors do this, so points for originality! You have a discriptive style and wonderful, original ideas, and I'm curious about where you'd be able to go with a longer breast-play chapter in the future, as well as incorporating the second giantess a little bit more into that scenario (and the story as a whole). For a first go at a breast-focused chapter, you did very well; as for the chapter as part of the story as a whole, you've set up the action nicely, and seem to have a knack at pacing the story in a way to keep the reader wanting to see the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man, coming to this school is like a death sentence, the parents must be INSANE to let their kids go here...Its a great story to be sure, but its a little hard to take in, without some kind of background.
Author's Response: For you and all those who have been frustrated over that gaping plot hole, I immensely appreciate your willingness to continue with your suspense of disbeleif in the hopes that I will fill it in later. Don't worry, that piece has already been written, just not the rest of the chapter that contains it. It will come soon, I promise.
Date: January 22 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story, all though not all of it is my standard. But when are you going to update Accidentally True?
Author's Response: That is a very good question. I have plans to update it, but I do not know when. In fact, when I said I was very nearly caught and exposed to the general populace as an author for this type of material it was when I was in the middle of writing Chapter 9 of Accidentally True. In my panic I deleted the chapter, which focused on Jenna at the end of the day when he desides to check up on her. I promise you sir that chapter will be written. Although I am pleased that the latest rising star on this site's grouping of the more prolific authors likes my work, I have a question: By standard do you mean type of fetish content or quality of writing style? If you want to review the newly-released chapter 4 I would appreciate it if you included your answer in the review.