Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

I very much enjoyed the chapter.  The second giantess was an unexpected but very welcome surprise.  I thought the the teasing interactions between the giantesses and the tiny couple were very well-written and a nice breath of fresh air, and Brooke trying to force them to have sex in her cleavage was a fantastic idea.  So often giantess interaction falls into the same motiveless cliches, but you really brought out a playfully cruel side in Brooke.  I also enjoyed the idea of the tiny characters being small enough to explore the bra strap as a ledge: I haven't seen many authors do this, so points for originality! You have a discriptive style and wonderful, original ideas, and I'm curious about where you'd be able to go with a longer breast-play chapter in the future, as well as incorporating the second giantess a little bit more into that scenario (and the story as a whole).  For a first go at a breast-focused chapter, you did very well; as for the chapter as part of the story as a whole, you've set up the action nicely, and seem to have a knack at pacing the story in a way to keep the reader wanting to see the next chapter.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like this story, all though not all of it is my standard. But when are you going to update Accidentally True?

Author's Response: That is a very good question. I have plans to update it, but I do not know when. In fact, when I said I was very nearly caught and exposed to the general populace as an author for this type of material it was when I was in the middle of writing Chapter 9 of Accidentally True. In my panic I deleted the chapter, which focused on Jenna at the end of the day when he desides to check up on her. I promise you sir that chapter will be written. Although I am pleased that the latest rising star on this site's grouping of the more prolific authors likes my work, I have a question: By standard do you mean type of fetish content or quality of writing style? If you want to review the newly-released chapter 4 I would appreciate it if you included your answer in the review.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm seeing a bit of commentary here regarding ideas of realism, so I thought I'd add my two cents.  There's an important distinction to be made about realism in stories like this.  Obviously there's suspension of disbelief needed on the scientific anomalies/magical elements that these types of stories have to include to make sense, and that's fine.  Unless I'm mistaken, the kind of critiques you're getting here about realism have to do with your character personalities and the logistics of your fictional world.  No matter how many people shrink, you want reactions and events taking place as a result to mirror lifelike human emotion as closely as possible, as that will draw readers into the story better by allowing them to relate to what takes place.  In that way, I can see where people are coming from a little.

That said, you've actually got something pretty decent here.  The situation feels different enough from most of the content I've seen show up lately and you have some fun scenarios at play.  Your dialogue feels pretty varied, too, as you represent a variety of emotions here other than the usual run and panic mode of most shrunken characters.  Keep it up.

Author's Response: First timescribe, now the god-emperor of gts authorship himself have given me the go-ahead to continue? If you listen very faintly there is a hallelujah chorus playing in my head. And as for the obvious "why would a normal person voluntarily go to someplace where these things can happen" that you and several others have mentioned, I have that explanation planned out and is actually beggining it's inception of a rough draft right now in a later chapter, where it will be placed in the middle of an M/f scene so as to let those for whom M/f just isn't their thing be rewarded by a desperately-needed piece of backstory. Once again thank you for your review, I really hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Reviewer: Gtsboy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Honestly, add another chapter, this story is great!

Reviewer: Gtsboy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Honestly, add another chapter, this story is great!

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

love both chapters :-)

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Holy geez!   That school is crazy!!!! :O

 

I love it! >:D  Seriously, I like how instead of shrinking at school is a one-time sorta thing with one or a few students, it is instead a student wide passtime. 
Thats an amazing twist there ;)

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

No need to be afraid. Good on you for getting your story ideas out there. Besides, on the internet we can all have secret identities.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

No need to be afraid. Good on you for getting your story ideas out there. Besides, on the internet we can all have secret identities.

Reviewer: Maniac Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2013 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think some of the reviews here are completely off the mark. I don't see how it makes any sense to attack the 'realism' in a medium which depends entirely on suspension of disbelief. As long as the storyline is self consistent, which this one is, then it seems daft to attack the 'world realism' by asking questions like 'how come they don't get arrested?'. That's just a feature of the universe in which the story is placed.

Aside from that, it seems the attacks come from the angle of not enjoying this aspect of the fetish as a personal preference. Which is entirely unfair, in a fetish laden with everything from scat to vore, nothing is going to please everybody.

The only valid criticism in my opinion is that near the end of the story, the dialogue is a little bit poorly formatted at times, but even that is a minor issue.

Please, I would like to see future updates from you.

Author's Response: Agreed, though for those who would prefer that kind of thing I will try to fit that stuff into later chapters if the plot allows for it. And if more updates is what you want, more updates is what you shall have :)