Date: January 26 2016 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
After 3 years I'm still here, waiting for the next chapter. WHAT THE FUCK.
Date: September 30 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Are you still alive?
[Report This]Date: June 28 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Please please finish this its soooo good
Date: April 10 2013 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please keep posting!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
Please continue this, I love it! Living in a city protected by 10000 foot high goddesses is a dream come true for me.
Author's Response:
Probably won't be updated for a while, sorry. :(
But, that doesn't mean it won't!
Date: January 17 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Where is the part 5? O.o
Date: January 08 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really liked the interview segment. I like the rock climbing idea too.
Although allowing the people to choose their own rooms seems like a very disorganized way of doing things. And what if there aren't enough rooms left? Then what? Can they communicate with there keepers?
Author's Response:
Accidentally deleted one of your review questions sorry! About that though they were re-enlarged because not all the people on the plane were going to the micro-city. I don't think I made that clear enough. Yeah, for the room plot you found a plot hole.
Date: January 08 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
How come they keep being refered to as goddesses when they actually normal humans? It seem rather odd because they don't have any god-like powers, and they aren't the ones doing the shrinking. The machines do that if I'm not mistaken.
Author's Response:
I was just referring to their all-encompansing size. I know that Gods are supposed to have powers, I just like the word I don't know what else to say.
Date: January 08 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's a nice start, although I feel 1/4 of an inch is actually too big for a person if a city the size of NYC is supposed to fit on 1 table. And do people get to turn big again if they want to leave the city? I think you mentioned relatives so they may want to come and visit obviously.
Author's Response:
For the city part, they are smaller than 1/4 of an inch, that's just for the airplane. At the city i mention that the Freedom Tower, which stands at 1,800 feet is about a foot tall to normal sized people. So the people of the city would be a bit shorter than 1/4 now.
Date: January 08 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
For all of you who like this story a lot, read 'A Game of Life' by Hedin. Probably the best Microcity story on this site.
But this is nice too. Don't get me wrong.
Author's Response:
Hedin is one of the best.
Date: January 06 2013 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. i love micro city stories.
There are far to few of those.
Thanks for writting it
Date: January 05 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
simply amazing. Keep posting please :D
Author's Response:
I've got like 3,000 words for the next chapter and am still not done with it. After that I'll have one more and then post them together.
Date: January 04 2013 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far I really like the story. The idea is very original, and it's also very well written. I'm looking forwards to the next chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I love your story "Tiny Nations," are you going to add to it anytime soon?