Date: April 04 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 (My New Life)
Fantastic start!!! Could we have some more shoes and maybe some hosiery in the next ? I.e tights stockings? Wicked stuff though!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 (My New Life)
Awesome, Amazing. Finally, someone else who has the same take on the fetish that I do and can WRITE!!! In the name of all that is perverted, please continue this tale.
Date: December 19 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 (My New Life)
I enjoyed this story, as well. I always love it when writers really let go and unleash the worst possible tortures/uses/bodily fluids they can imagine. I hope you keep it up!
Date: December 19 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 (My New Life)
İ know giving advice more than once is annoying.But i must say i really liked this story and amazed by the fact you have written this by just siting and typing randomly.Dude i beg you,please include what i have suggested in my first review and i will support your story more than i do now.
Date: December 19 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 (My New Life)
Hey guys, thank for your the positive feedback. I'm glad you liked the story. I will absolutely take your comments into consideration as I continue the story. Everyone is different and has different opinions so I'll do my best. Also, I literally had a thought, sat down and wrote this on a whim. So this was the result lol. I do have an idea to have her very evil Aunt included into the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2012 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 (My New Life)
Hey thank you for posting this story.hope you update it alot.Feels good to see a micro foot story in this board,thank you again.
İ would like to give suggestions if you dont mind.
1)Please make him smaller.Smaller than a speck if possible.İt will make the story way hotter in that way
2)Be more describtive.İm not telling you suck which i cant lol.Just use more describitive words and you will see the difrence.
3)Add more gts friends,possibly cruel ones.Make the main gts more evil.İt will give a fresh air to the story.
4)Add how he feels and how much hes scared.Tell us what he feels when he sees a microscopic toejam piece and tell how he reacts and feels.
And last 5)Please include lots of between toes scene combined with these other suggestions written above.
İ really liked this story.The toejam is a great factor.
Rated 10/10!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 (My New Life)
I would really like to see this story finished so please continue. A longer story gets more readers and more reviews. I think my one criticism so far is that I noticed that you abbreviated a few words (eg somewhere in the story you said prob instead of probably.) I'd suggest not doing that as it can really ruin the mojo of the story in my opinion.