[Report This]Date: February 08 2022 7:14 PM Title: Small Doses (Part 3)
Superb!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2016 8:17 AM Title: Small Doses (Part 2)
Hi again. It’s funny, I started reading this chapter, and I began to feel some annoyance at the tiny things that need to be fixed, truly minor details here and there. Then I opened my eyes in disbelief at the fact that he simply showed up at the doctor’s office, at that size! Please understand that has NOTHING to do with your skill as a writer, or even as a storyteller. That is simply my maternal instinct kicking in, when I read that a tiny man has ventured out into the world, unprotected, danger lurking everywhere…
Then I forgot all about being vexed when I got to the sexy parts. Super sexy parts! I loved the way she teased him, examined him (could have read about that on and on) and had her way with him. But then I didn’t like that he simply left again, walked out that door to face the world a shrunken man, utterly defenseless.
I’m reading on!
Author's Response:
Yes, I often do find I leave in the odd typo or two, among other things.
I would say that if he's signed up to the doctors already, then with this being the UK and the NHS, he should be fine. Maybe that's a cultural difference there.
I had him walk on his own as a, slightly, silly suspension of disbelief to be honest. It's designed, slightly, to highlight the ludicrous nature of the subject matter, a nod to how daft shrinking is, and how charmed their world is. I wanted your maternal instinct to kick in. You're supossed to not want him to do that.
My main aim was to give them a world where he treats his 'affliction' (improvment) as the same as a common cold. The old-school stoic man. Let me know what you think when you're done.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2016 11:20 PM Title: Small Doses (Part 1)
Alright, comrade… I’ve been wanting to write a review about your story for over a year, but Things, Life, and Whatnot got in the way, and I never did. But I’m making the time now.
1. Parvati both annoys and charms me. I want to hit her upside the head and tell her to stop whining, and be a woman. But I can’t put myself in her shoes. I’m 206.5’ tall, and I have no idea what it feels to be small. I’ve always felt gigantic, super, super tall, even though in reality I’m “only” 5’6”.
2. The chapter could benefit from some light editing, but I’m not even going to bother looking and telling you what, since it doesn’t affect my enjoyment of the story.
3. I’m confused as to the proper procedure reading doctor’s visits at this place. I’ve never seen a place where the patient just walks right in to see the doctor, without an introduction, filling out forms, etc. But maybe you wanted to skip that part. It messed with my suspension of disbelief a little bit. It could just be that it’s different there, than it is here. Yeah, let’s go with that.
4. I like that they got it on right away. If I ever got myself a little guy that was shrinking, I’d be all over him like butter on toast. But I’m slightly weirded out that she then got off by herself without a single word to him of what she was doing, and equally puzzling was his silent acceptance of this. But maybe she’ll tell him later. Let me find out…
Date: June 03 2014 4:40 PM Title: Small Doses (Part 7)
That was an amusing read. I do wonder how he made it to the hospital at only a foot tall and it seems a little strange how little people responded to his condition. It left me thinking that very strange things have happened in their world before.
It was quite interesting seeiing a giantess that liked to be dominated a little bit and even set herself up so she could play along. I do wonder how much protection she could really offer him though. Could she protect him if a rapiest or thief broke into her home? That or a dangerous animal. Whenever somene promises protection to a shrunken may I just can't help but doubt they could back that promise up unless there is something more to them.
[Report This]Date: December 07 2013 12:54 AM Title: Small Doses (Part 1)
I'm sorry I missed this the first time around. Gentle stories need all the love they can get.
I find the idea of pleasuring a voluntarily bound giantess extremely hot. I've been trying to work that scenario into a story, and I really like what you've done here. I made the mistake of reading it at work on my mobile, and I had to knock off early.
I think sharing GTS stories is an excellent way to introduce the fetish to one's significant other, and I'm sure there are women out there who would even prefer the gory stuff. Even so, a gentle love story is probably a safer way to start, especially if it gets as raunchy as this one.
Thanks for writing!
Date: December 06 2012 12:51 PM Title: Small Doses (Part 1)
It's a good start, although it does seem a bit strange how they would have sex even though they don't know each other that well. Before it seemed as if they weren't very confident people and now Parvati isn't holding back.
Author's Response:
She is confident she just isn't alble to show it because everyone drains the confidence out of her. If you're wondering why they would have sex so quick? A. There's a few days build up and B. It's set in Britain. They'd have sex that quickly.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2012 7:50 AM Title: Small Doses (Part 1)
I have been reading Giantess erotica for the last 5 years and this has been by far the best story I have read. It was sexy, had some mischeiviousness, and then some good doses of love in it, and thats not to play on words.
This is the story I would use to help introduce my significant other to my more inimate appetites.
Some bit of grammatical issue though, but considering the content, I really don't care since it was too prolific or obstructing the story, but you should polish this story up, it may very well be worth it with this one!
Author's Response:
This is genuinely a very nice response mate. Honest. Oddly though it is rather annoying. This is because I re-read my stories a lot and try to find any grammatical fuck-ups. The fact that they still slip though the net drives me mad. It's not your fault, I like to know about this sort of thing. I just find proof reading by far the hardest part of writing, my brain almost has no appetite for it.
The fact that you would use it to introduce your GF/wife to this fetish is a total honour. I always knew that there was a market for loving gentle stuff, instead of the typical gastly parade of feet, vore and stories containing a girl called Megan.
Anyway, I love plays on words...
Thanks again.
-Comrade
[Report This]Date: November 19 2012 10:51 PM Title: Small Doses (Part 7)
SUPER LONG AND SUPER SEXY! that was a great story. I wish their was feet involved but that was still a fun story to read.