Date: November 29 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
love the story so far cant wait ti see more
Date: November 18 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT STORY!!! Could you put pictures of Brooke and Skylar?
[Report This]Date: November 17 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is really good.
can't wait for more.
Date: November 16 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love your stories but you can be a bit** about reviews. If your going to right a story finish it!!! Like the other one you haven't finished. I love those. But you are a bit**. Don't write I you won't finish it.
Date: November 15 2012 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
This has great potential!
The mood was set very nicely, and the characters are both well defined and promising. The dialogue also flows very naturally which helps in their developement.
I'll look forward to future additions!
Date: November 15 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Excelent chapter! I can`t wait to see more!
Date: November 14 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
Excelent chapter! I can`t wait to see more!
[Report This]Date: November 14 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
i forgot to rate it good! =)
Date: November 14 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a very good story! I guess it will get better after but it's a good start!!
continue! =)
[Report This]Date: November 14 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
I would very much like to see this story continued. :)
Date: November 14 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
The characters looks nice! Keep up the good work.
Date: November 13 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Keep in this way :D U're amazing good author :)
Date: November 13 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
great beginning, please keep writing.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great so far! Keep it up
Date: November 13 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far, I already don't like skyler but the rest I enjoy will you make him very slowly get bigger that would be a change something I haven't seen on here before.
Date: November 13 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the three distinct ways you have set up for the family to interact with Jake. It's well written and I look forward to more of this story! Keep it coming!
Date: November 13 2012 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good plot, I really like the Idea of All the women being sour towards men. The way that he(Jake) wakes-up to find himself SHRUNK. It's a really good storie- Can't wait to see what happens next! KEEP GOING DUDE!
[Report This]Date: November 13 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not bad at all. I enjoy the diversity of personalities you have here, and it's a fun set-up; I like the bug bite used as a jumping off point. Be careful on proofreadings; the errors can be a little distracting in places, and you could probably still benefit from some more vivid descriptions and fluid conversations, but overall I like this.
Date: November 13 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
Keep writing its looking good
Also gravitate torward some of those tags you used
Ex feet
[Report This]Date: November 13 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your stories are the best, bring on the mom!!!