Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Like the story though, hope to see more of the sister.

Reviewer: Ace of Spades Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 5: Judy's Beginning

Excelent work! Please, keep going!

Author's Response:

thanks! i will soon

Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2012 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Great Story! Now that we know that Scott has siblings (Kyle and Maggie) around his own age, Mom should teach Maggie how to administer a "time-out" to her brothers when they misbehave.   A new familfy tradition passed down from every mother to their daughter.  Also, in the future, scotch tape could be used to attach Scott to everyday objects (high heels, brake pedals, exercise equipment, etc) for more serious punishments.  What do you think?

Author's Response:

It's like you read my mind.  I was planning on including Maggie in the fun near the conclusion of the story.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4: Kicking Back

Glad to hear it will be longer than 5 chapter, it definitely didn't look like it as close to the end.

Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 4: Kicking Back

I would of been nice to have a lead up before jumping in with the "Ohh god" line. I would have liked to hear her son about the time out line. Nice story though. Like it except that part, but good non the less.

Author's Response:

i really only skimmed over that section so it wouldn't be a rehash. if that's the sort of reaction you're interested in, i spend a chapter or so on it in the first story of this series

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2012 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 3: Irresponsible

I love how his mom acts an the fact that she is enjoying it is great. Loved the ending where she was suppressing her giggles. Can't wait to see what happens next. Also the fact that she still grounded him for cursing an then extended it the way she did, I love that whole scene.
Hope to see more.

aaron

Author's Response:

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 3: Irresponsible

"Then in that case, you can add on an extra day to the punishment" -- I love the idea, and the way it fits naturally in the chapter is worth a whole giantess story.

The only bad thing is.. well, the wait is killing me! I should probably banish myself from this site and come back when the story is finished ;p

Author's Response:

this story is mostly already written, so the wait won't be that long

Reviewer: carnaj2 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 2: Matriarchal Rule

Loving this so far, a very good start.

I really enjoy your writing style, and your grammar and punctuation is near perfect, which is also a plus. Nothing more distracting in my opinion of a story that is full of errors that force you out of the reading enjoyment. Too, as I have mentioned in other reviews, I like descriptive details; what the people are wearing, setting the scene of the room and surroundings and even similes.

Finally your characters seem real to me. They speak and react like normal people despite the abnormal situation. No flowerey speeches or annoying pet names but a mother and a son who, under other conditions would seem typically normal.

Definitely looking forward to further chapters. Wondering if and how the mother might change as the situation escalates and how the brother and sister will eventually react. Keep up the great work!

carnaj

 

Author's Response:

thanks, i really appreciate it. i definitely intend on tackling in this story both the mother's developing personality and the subject of scott's siblings

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

awesome, dood. also, i know its a prequel but could you please put a 6th chapter with an alternate non–canon ending where she turns him into her pet or swallows him? anyway i think its awesome

Author's Response:

thanks for reading/reviewing. i probably won't put anything like that in this story, but i'll certainly keep it in mind for future ones

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Law Won

Very intrigued by this chapter. An would like to see more.

aaron

Author's Response:

and more there shall be