Date: May 16 2014 1:30 PM Title: The Queen’s Game
I like the premise. toying with them and turning them them into game pieces for their amusement
[Report This]Date: April 08 2013 8:16 PM Title: Queen's Gambit
great & can't wait 4 more. good author. {meant 4 chapter 5
[Report This]Date: April 07 2013 6:18 PM Title: Queen's Knight
Great job. I'm really liking this story. Love chess.
aaron
[Report This]Date: April 07 2013 1:51 PM Title: The Queen’s Game
I agree with everyone's sentiments on your excellent writing and sense of narration. I am intrigued by the setup and hope you are able to continue this story. Given your tags, I am also interested in seeing what you plan in terms of the violent/sadistic sections. Despite being a foot fanatic, stories like that are really well-written like this make it just a pleasure to read, regardless of how the tinies are done in! Great stuff.
[Report This]Date: April 07 2013 11:05 AM Title: The Queen’s Game
It was nice to see an update from this. You have a talent for making simple actions like a character being picked up and dangled by a shirt quite fun. Looking forward to your continuing this, however long it takes.
[Report This]Date: April 07 2013 5:43 AM Title: Queen's Knight
I am glad to see this renewed.
Date: April 07 2013 4:51 AM Title: Queen's Knight
Well this is a gem I hadn't read before.
Enjoyin the sisters personality.
though that is one nonchalant mom I must say >.>
[Report This]Date: April 06 2013 8:47 PM Title: Queen's Knight
Even if there hasn't been much action (yet?) I love this story -- the way it's written makes it worth to wait for such a looooong time between updates ;p
[Report This]Date: October 24 2012 7:59 AM Title: The Queen’s Game
love the story u got going here only hope u continue it soon, really love ur hand play descriptivness hope u add more soon
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. I am planning to write more, but I've just been really busy lately. Hopefully, I'll get back to it this coming week.
Date: October 13 2012 12:50 PM Title: The Queen’s Game
Please keep pool party
Author's Response:
I may get back to my Pool Party story eventually, but I'm just not feeling motivated for that right now. Inspiration struck, so I started writing this instead. Glad you like my work, though.
Date: October 13 2012 5:58 AM Title: The Starting Position
Finaly the game starts, wondr what happens to the winners and to the losers >:) cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
As Emma herself said earlier, the game already started. The primary game here just isn't chess. :lol:
And I'm thinking there actually will be a surprising winner and loser in the end, but again, it has nothing to do with who wins the chess game.
As for the future chapters, I'm hoping you won't have to wait two weeks like you did for chapter 4. I should have more time to write this week, and I'm feeling motivated, so the next chapter should come quickly.
Date: October 12 2012 11:30 PM Title: The Starting Position
Emma is becoming a favorite...
Author's Response:
I have a lot more plans for her for future chapters. :)
Date: September 29 2012 12:03 AM Title: The Queen’s Game
Very good story.
These are the kind of story i like cause it descripts very well the details in the process of shrinking, grabbing, how the tinies feel about it, etc
Very good. Thanks a lot!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it, and thanks for the specific feedback. As I said in my response below, it helps with knowing what to include when writing more.
And if you like the details of the shrinking, I think you'll like what I'm planning for chapter 5 and beyond. The story is called "Pawned!" for a reason - the boys won't be staying king sized forever. There's more shrinking coming.
Date: September 28 2012 4:05 PM Title: Queen's Gambit
Super! more pls
Author's Response:
Chapter 4 just posted, but only because you said the magic word. ;)
[Report This]Date: September 28 2012 3:42 PM Title: Queen's Gambit
Great idea for a story an I hope to se more.
aaron
Author's Response:
New chapter posted, more to come soon, if I have time to write them. :)
Date: September 28 2012 8:39 AM Title: Queen's Gambit
Love the story so far, great script, cannot wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: September 27 2012 10:14 PM Title: The Queen’s Game
It was a nice surprise to find a story of this kind of quality on the most recent list. It's a simple idea, your characters have consistent and realistic personalities, and the dialogue is smooth and flowing. Keep it up, this was very enjoyable.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the specific feedback. Knowing exactly what it is that people like about a story helps me write more.