[Report This]Date: October 10 2012 2:01 AM Title: And that is why going down someone else's throat is not a good idea...
Dude im #7 most Prolific Reviewer. I love to encourage authors on their stories,and I have no life lol. The stories I read I am grateful for. I love nagas and giant spiders(Dridders). IF all u need is reviews to write more im here for u lol. I cant wait a school of giantess! King=Man lol.
Author's Response:
I've met three girls online that have "king" in their username. I'm just checking. So... Dridders. Actually, I didn't know what they were called. Well, hope you liked the story so far. Cause I am not even done yet! Not by a long shot! And school is gonna be hectic.
P.S.: You have a life. Don't undermine yourself.
Date: October 09 2012 11:47 PM Title: And that is why going down someone else's throat is not a good idea...
Well that explains how Jared got better enough to help after being broken. So school huh?
Author's Response:
Yes. Oh boy, he got broken up by only three giantesses. And one of them was half his age. Imagine what several hundred giantesses AND giants could do.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2012 11:43 PM Title: Dangerous CPR
Not to nitpick, but didn't she kill those two guys in Ch 2? I mean she feels bad now because she was wrong, but she's clearly willing to kill to take revenge on those who hurt Jared. Seriously, if Bria wasn't already her friend...
Author's Response:
Well yeah. But to kill someone it makes a bigger impact if they are your size and sprawled across the ground, glazed eyes staring at the sky. The men were both swallowed and she immediately forgot about him. Always ask questions. I usually have answers.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2012 11:57 PM Title: Dangerous CPR
I liked it. who the hell knows wht the inside of a spider girl looks like. lol. Your intellect is good enough to write a good story like this.
Author's Response:
...If I said that I do... what would you think?
[Report This]Date: October 05 2012 12:04 AM Title: Woah to the Web Weaver
This chapter was a tease lol
Author's Response:
Nooooooo. It was a... I had no idea! *Rolls eyes* Yeah yeah, a little rude. But I had to say what happened, right? Poor Hachime. Why? WHY??? BECAUSE I CAN DAMMIT, SO STOP ASKING ME!!! XDD I'm kidding, kidding. That was at least a little funny, right?
Date: September 20 2012 5:37 PM Title: Farming Accident
Well im glad to heve stepped into your world :) just hope I dont get eaten lol. takes a real writer to come up with there own world.
Author's Response:
You want to continue this conversation in shout?
[Report This]Date: September 20 2012 4:23 PM Title: Farming Accident
is this set in the world of Felarya? and does anyone know the names of other stories with nagas? Ive only read a few. any help would be cool
Author's Response:
One, no. That's the one with Crisis, right? No, this isn't. This is MY story, in MY land, in MY head. :B Anyway, I wish I knew. Sorry. I can't help you there.
Date: September 19 2012 9:05 PM Title: Meet Tina
Interesting, a nice naga story. These are always fun. (I'll actually worry that there are other not-so-nice giant creatures out there.)
Author's Response:
Thank you! We do not have enough Naga stories. And of those not many follow a Naga as a main character. And of course. Bria almost ate him cause he was a human, even though she was a nice person. So their are definitely even worse out there.
[Report This]Date: September 19 2012 1:03 AM Title: Identity Crisis
homunculus? Ive heard the name a few times mostly in Fullmetal Alchemist. am i wrong? good ch. :)
Author's Response:
^^ Thank you. Eeeh? No. I've personally seen that show, but that is not what I am talking about. It was supposed to be a monster that could replace humans.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2012 11:20 PM Title: Meet Tina
Damn Im checking every few hrs for more! I hate:) stories that dont update every 30mins. lol JK. no really I see this can go on to be a long story if u put in some time and heart. type damn you lol
Author's Response:
You are? Well, I probably will post about once every day (almost said year. I'm an idiot XP) Just because I don't update every thirty minutes does not mean you can rush me. I know what is going to happen next, but I need to work on the actual story. SO HOLD YOU DAMN HELL-HOUNDS!!! Yeah, people have to get used to my way of talking. Cause in the end, ADHD rules my life.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2012 9:59 AM Title: Meet Tina
First I love friendly nagas already a great story. second I thought the flow of the story was really good. Revealing the the giantess character is important and you did it very correctly. cant wait for more!:)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I really do love other's inputs, and I personally don't see why people like sadistic giantesses. I put the sadistic types as villains.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I really do love other's inputs, and I personally don't see why people like sadistic giantesses. I put the sadistic types as villains.
Date: September 17 2012 2:02 AM Title: Farming Accident
I have a feeling this could be a story though you mention "The Unclean One" before explaining who or what this is. The name just seems to come out of nowhere.
Author's Response:
I suppose. But I mentioned a golden bottle, refrencing alcohol and the man tries to rape Jared. I don't know. If you think I should have been more clear, well, the customers always right I suppose.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2012 5:05 PM Title: Farming Accident
I really like this kind of fantasy scenario. You made it look even more interesting as I kept reading. I am really curious and anxious to discover how this giantess will be.
Like @Afroking just said, I think you should describe a bit more about Jared; like the color of his hair, or if he is very weak or strong, or how tall he is, just some examples. I couldn't help but to keep wondering throughout the entire chapter how old he is since the elder called him kid. Well, some old people like to say that even a young 26 years old man is still just a kid to them Hah
Date: September 16 2012 2:56 PM Title: Farming Accident
I really enjoyed read this. Can u describe Jared? I like to picture the character it helps me really get into the story. I love and hate cliffhangers it makes me want to read more :) good start on 1st story
Author's Response:
Yes! You will read more! YOU WILL!!! MWAHAHAHAHAH! Haha. Ha. Huuuu. Well, it was awesome meeting you!
Date: September 16 2012 2:34 PM Title: Farming Accident
I really liked this! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Such high praise! I feel so touched. Thank you for being my first reviewer