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Date: July 16 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 14

At least Beth speaks english. Not that will make much difference in the end.



Author's Response: Nope! Not much difference, at all. Check out chapter 15, if you don't believe me. ;-)

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Date: July 16 2013 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

Remember the tiny man who turned out to be the master criminal in the Spider Woman 1979 cartoon about the olympic games?



Author's Response: No; but, if you hum a few bars, I could lip-synch it. X-D

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Date: June 11 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

So little Bob has made a break for it. Why do i get the feeling he has gone from the frying pan into the fire?



Author's Response: Running in a blind panic like that, there's (ahem!) "little" else he could do!

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Date: June 11 2013 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

Ah the girls locker room, where both clothing and reality can be suspended....



Author's Response: HA! GOOD ONE! :-D

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Date: March 23 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

Worn around the giantess's neck. That might be fun ... at least for a while.

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Date: March 23 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

I feel sorry for Gabe. He's still treated like a good luch charm.



Author's Response: But, of course, he doesn't feel lucky, at all. Now, does he? ;-)

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Date: March 21 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

Interesting call on the personality 'types', of GTS'er's .  The work-a-holic type whom unwittingly ignore the wrong woman?  I don't get it?  please elaborate...



Author's Response: Well, it seems like some stories feature a guy who's really focused on his day-to-day stuff. But, he winds up getting shrunk by some bee-yotch who thinks he's purposely snubbed her. Leading to all kinds of gruesomely gratuitious reprisals!

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Date: March 20 2013 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

BOING!  MMMMMMMMMPH!  Is that in He Wenna's native tongue, or.. :"{) LOL !



Author's Response: Gag-muffled pleas for help are the same in any language. ;-D

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Date: February 21 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

"he was working on a lap-top computer!"

Sorry to be silly, but my pun laden mind just placed this in another meaning, as in a shrinkie literally "ON a computer".



Author's Response: "Great Scott! I've created a punster."

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Date: February 20 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

An intresting change of pace. Wonder how the professor would react if he knew shrunken men are real and that he's a character in a GTS story.



Author's Response: Only time will tell.

Author's Response: Only time will tell.

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Date: January 14 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

Really top quality sound effects LOL



Author's Response: In the immortal words of Wm. Fakespeare: "I can do naught but try." ;-)

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Date: January 14 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

It's been a while. Having that little recap at the start was a good idea. Aw Bob doesn't like being kissed. Too bad.



Author's Response: Thanks. And, public displays of affection aren't everyone's cup of tea. Although, at his present size, he could all too easily wind up in one! ;-)

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Date: October 14 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

A chapter driven by sound effects ... until we get to the leotards, of course.



Author's Response: Well, let's face it. They're half the reason men watch women's gymnastics in the first place!

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Date: October 12 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Bob. I do feel sorry for him and his brother. That said, keep this story going.



Author's Response: I shall, indeed. :-)

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Date: September 16 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

Chocolate Mouse.

Ironic to discover this now. I've been working on MOUSE MAN - TIME MASTER all weekend, and am about to post the first chapter.



Author's Response: That message brought to you courtesy of Shamless Cross-Plugs for Men. Of which I'm not only the vice-president. I'm also a client. ;-D

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Date: September 14 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wonder if the girls would have won anyway without Gabe? (I'm too lazy to check the results of the real games)

I bet Gabe hates the dessert chocolate "Mouse". 

Wonder what's going to happen next?

 



Author's Response: No need to check them. I did it as part of my background research. As for what's going to happen, next? That's up to the Fates! ;-)

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Date: September 06 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

and which part of his body was having the up and down motions ... or strange stirrings in the region of a utility belt?



Author's Response: In the immortal words of Louis "Satchmo" Armstrong: "If you gots to ask the question, you a'int never gonna know the answer." ;-)

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Date: September 06 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

Do unto smothers as you would have smothers do unto you.



Author's Response: Brothers Tom and Dick could not agree more.

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Date: September 06 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

Will Bob get away, or is he (as we Australians say) "Stuffed"?



Author's Response: Just keep reading, Oh Peerless Scribe. ;-)

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Date: September 06 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

Sounds like Julanna and Larissa are in fine dorm .... errr form.



Author's Response: GOOD ONE! :-)

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