[Report This]Date: March 16 2023 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoyed this lengthy story, where the boyfriend is grabbed without his girlfriends notice and played with, tortured and almost eaten while the girlfriend and her sister make the mad scramble against time and the largess of the camp to try to save him before the sister's friend or one of her friends do irreparable damage to him.
I think the story might have been better if they had arrived just a little late, with the first of the girl's friend having eaten him as she desired, them barging into the cabin as he's being deposited by the girl into the toilet. But, sometimes the threat of being vored is a good suspense builder.
Date: March 31 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Really convinced me Brad was dead haha nice twist. Only thing thats missing is what happened with Rachel and those girls?
Date: November 13 2012 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man Brad must be the calmest guy in the whole world...After every horrible thing that happened because of Ashley, I certainly would never even be in the same country as her.
[Report This]Date: November 13 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
please continue with this. Great story so far!
Author's Response:
I didn’t plan on continuing the story, but maybe I could try and make a part 2 with same characters… I really don’t have any ideas. But if you have an idea to continue it I might be able to work off of it.
Date: November 13 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please punish Rachel some way! What she did to brad! Punish all the girls( not Ashley) that hurt him! Please!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2012 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 16
ok im going to tell the truth I thought u killed off brad. I was prepared to be really disappointed, then I kept reading lol. good way to end a story. Thats why I like your storys after all the hell and pain the main character, gets the well deserved happy ending. bravo for the twist with the parents death. And now for my request if u havent already started on a story can u make one with the main character a Female? u know G shrinks G, possibly lesbian?lol. It would be interesting. just an idea:) THX for the story it was another great one
Author's Response:
I do have some stories planed, about fourish. I didn't have a G on G action, but maybe I can switch some characters around so it is. I do have a man and woman shrinking story planed out, so if thats fine for you. If you have any idea's for a story about it I could try to play off any ideas you have right now. Thanks for the review.
Date: October 14 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
DAMN she is a evil girl, killing cats for fun? Way to make a evil little girl lol. Lets hope Brad is not there all summer. Are all 4 girls going to get a ch. with brad?
[Report This]Date: October 03 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Free BRAD! glad to see u back. Let the adventure continue!
[Report This]Date: September 18 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
I actually like he got taken to camp, not to crazy over the whole family finding out he's shrunk. Still can't wait for the rest!
[Report This]Date: September 13 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Amanda's dad drives fast. lol. save BRAD!
Date: September 11 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it!! But please let the guy win
[Report This]Date: September 05 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Can't wait for the next chapter! Love your work, sorry I dont review often but keep it up!
[Report This]Date: September 04 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wish girls would dare each other like that when I play truth or dare with them! Great story!
[Report This]Date: September 04 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
next ch. can be happy or just another painful day for brad. I cant wait!
[Report This]Date: September 01 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love this story!
[Report This]Date: August 29 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yay! I love buttcrack stories, especially with farting!
Can't wait for the next part!
[Report This]Date: August 28 2012 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love how she could be violent with him but she also treasures him. Like i said before in your other stories your becoming a master at going from gentle to cruel. A skill that u should be proud of good work
[Report This]Date: August 27 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is a very good story. I'm hoping fir a rescue :-)
Dave
[Report This]Date: August 23 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great story so far! Must admit I love a bit butt!!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Not a bad story here. You're writing is good and the pacing feels right. I liked your games story and was impressed with your versatility. This one feels completely different and yet its still pretty good.
looking forward to more