Date: November 12 2015 2:50 AM Title: Into the Mind of Jessica
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Date: December 18 2012 6:55 AM Title: A new ally
Great story, cannot wait to see more evil girls go to nanogeni
Date: November 22 2012 1:47 AM Title: A new ally
Well, I have to admit, this did get confusing toward the end. Which shrunken man was betrayed by whom? Daniel, Chris, or the narrator?
Author's Response:
Narrator screwed Chris over by leading him to Amber, and the narrator recaptured Daniel when he escaped from Jessica. As far as i know the narrator was only betrayed when Zack told Amber he was still alive.
Date: November 22 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chris and Emily
Wait a minute! I thought it was Chris who betrayed Daniel's presence. I better go back and re-read that earlier chapter.
Author's Response:
Zack told Amber about the narrator, if that's what you're thinking of.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2012 1:33 AM Title: Playtime with Amber
As we used to say in the 1960's: "So far, it's been a real gas."
:-)
Date: November 21 2012 11:27 PM Title: The Nightmare Begins
I loved your stories!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2012 11:06 PM Title: The battle
Maybe Daniel will be caught and remain...forever Amber's.
;-)
Author's Response:
Right now he belong's to Cassie, but the story I'm doing now will be revisiting each of the stories i have up right now, and that just might change.:)
[Report This]Date: November 21 2012 11:04 PM Title: Cassie's game time
Oh, come on! How could "you" possibly survive direct stepping on?
Author's Response:
I actually will be explaining the 'how' in the story I'm working on now.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2012 11:03 PM Title: Escape!
Not past the end of chapter 18, I'm guessing.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2012 11:02 PM Title: Broken by an unaware tormentor
"If you gots to ask the question, you ain't never gonna know the answer."
---Louie Armstrong
[Report This]Date: November 21 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chris's nightmare
You wanna bet, Chris?*
As to my having guessed wrong, in the previous review? Insert shrug icon here.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2012 10:57 PM Title: The deal
I'll say complete death, by the end of chapter 15, awaits him.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2012 3:05 PM Title: Jessica and Daniel
A little misprint, using "Cassie" where you clearly meant "Jessica." Otherwise, not bad!
Author's Response:
D'oh! I did that a couple of times, thought i got 'em all, I'll try to fix it soon.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2012 2:55 PM Title: The Capture of Daniel
Elton John could a write a song about this chapter: "Daniel, you dumb-ass...!"
[Report This]Date: September 06 2012 2:49 PM Title: Fun at the Mall
Part of me still hopes Allison finds him...without telling the other girls.
;-)
[Report This]Date: September 06 2012 2:45 PM Title: More Bad Luck
With teenage girls? "Shopping" and "hunting" are usually syonymous.
Date: September 02 2012 10:37 PM Title: Into the Mind of Jessica
i think that you should have you find a shurnken daniel and your kicking his ass when jessica walks in and sees it and she grabs you and trys to find a sort of reward for beating up her brother and so it may ad another dynamic to the story. she treets him nicely and could possibly help her with some of her fantisies includeing some mouthplay, body exploration, and maby she finds a way to transform the tinies in to other things. but this is a great peace of lititure way to go and keep it up
[Report This]Date: September 02 2012 9:21 PM Title: Into the Mind of Jessica
I can you give you a _hint_ as to who's shoe I hope it will be.
"All you want do is ride around with Alli. RIDE, ALLI, RIDE!"
[Report This]Date: September 02 2012 9:13 PM Title: More Trouble
In answer to "your" second question: probably not.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2012 9:10 PM Title: The Fate of Zack
Well, chapter nine will probably inform us as to Zack's fate. But, as of right now, I'm off to chaper eight!*
*Poetry not intended.