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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing story. I loved how it started as 3 and then was only one un/fortunate survivior.  Also how the pov is mostly him but at the end she puts in her word and its so cruel and evil. I loved it. Keep up the Excellent work!

I've read most of your stories and I know whatever you post next will be on the same level of Greatness as this one. (Clever title too.)

 

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, I like the style. :)

It's great how Ryan has a logically dictated train of thought. He's a nice well rounded character, I have to wonder what he would have been like had one of the others survived to interact with him...

It would be interesting to see a story like this made up of date by date journal entries from both perspectives. The bit at the end seemed to make Mary's personality feel more 3 dimensional and justified.

Good work, this was fun!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.

I did plan have the other survive for longer in the original, but it didn't turn out very good, so I changed it to what it is now.

Besides, my favorite scenario is a one on one.

I wanted to keep the fact that Mary knew about his journal a surprise for the end, also Ryan didn't have a way to know what day it was.

 

Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Parrot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

very enjoyable story.  glad to see you reintroduced it or id have likely missed this work



Author's Response:

That was the plan

 

Thanks for the comment

Reviewer: jupiter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi! Thank you for writing such an amazing story. I love authors who aren't afraid to explore the GTS topic & the taboo! Please continue writing!



Author's Response:

You're welcome.

If you love GTS then you've come to the right site.

Don't worry, I plan to.

 

Thanks for the comment.

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