[Report This]Date: October 31 2012 11:47 PM Title: Casey's "prank"
Fun read! Rob's giggling amused me :P
Hope to see more in the future
[Report This]Date: October 02 2012 7:31 PM Title: Casey's "prank"
Looks like he's hit rock BOTTOM. LOL.
Author's Response:
Oh believe me I don't think thats bottom, I'm sure Casey can do much worse :)
[Report This]Date: October 02 2012 7:30 PM Title: Getting Mandy's attention
So he's the Captain Scarlet (the indestructible man) of the Tom Thumb set.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2012 7:27 PM Title: Immortal?
Oh the pain! More of a vore man myself, but still going to keep reading.
Author's Response:
I might try a few vore chapters because I'm aware that it's a very popular category. The only problem is, I tried writing vore once before in my "Motherly love" story but it didn't go to well. I'm not very good at writing vore as I'm not much of a vore man myself. But theres a first time for everything so I may give it a try :) Glad you like the story.
[Report This]Date: October 02 2012 7:26 PM Title: The adventure begins
But then again it could be Casey
[Report This]Date: October 02 2012 7:25 PM Title: Bad day at school
I'm guessing the starring role here will be Mandy's.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2012 5:41 PM Title: Casey's "prank"
Thanks for finally posting this new chapter. I was starting to worry that you might become too far "behind" in your work. ;-D
Author's Response: Lol I know what you mean. My problem is I'm one of the worlds most extreme procrastinators. I get ideas for the story, then realise I have to type them and get demotivated :P hopefully the next chapter won't take as long to come out.
Date: July 30 2012 8:07 PM Title: Bad day at school
Great stuff, great stuff.
Good charactars, fantastic story line, feasible suspension of physics... this is looking like a top-notch story!
So, not to be rude, but, when do we get to the butt?!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Don't worry, the ass stuff will come, butt I have to build up to it first :) (Heh, see what I did there?) I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up. It could be tomorrow, it could be in a month. Sorry for being really inconsistant with my chapters, its just that I have a very busy schedule. But no matter how long it takes me to update the story, rest assured that the story most certainly isn't dead.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2012 11:22 AM Title: Getting Mandy's attention
I read all four of these chapters, in one sitting. And, it was really nice to read a story like this _without_ the incest angle, for once!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I know what mean. I've already written an incest story so I figured writing another one would just be rewriting my other story with different characters.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2012 10:39 AM Title: Bad day at school
just the way they act after seein the main character at this size. the sister is just too evil from the get go i would have built up to it because you didnt develope a positive or negitive relation ship in the begining. the mother was ok but with her child in that condition i doubt shed be thinkinng about breakfast. i hate to sound like im just dogging you but i did enjoy it. i think its funny but hey who am i
Author's Response:
I don't feel like you're "dogging" me at all. In fact, I'd choose a review like yours over "Great job, keep going!" anyday. These kind of reviews allow me to improve my stories. After all, what's a story without criticism? Thanks for the review and keep them coming! :)
[Report This]Date: July 21 2012 5:08 PM Title: Getting Mandy's attention
still can believe them but hey comedy is hard
[Report This]Date: July 21 2012 5:04 PM Title: Immortal?
the characters are histarical but not believable to me
Author's Response:
I do tend to exaggerate things quite a bit, including the way people behave. Do think maybe you can tell me what wasn't believable about them? Just so that I can improve on it in future chapters.
[Report This]Date: July 21 2012 4:58 PM Title: Bad day at school
wow it actually made me laugh
Date: July 21 2012 1:09 AM Title: Getting Mandy's attention
Wonderfull! I love the mother-son interaction in these stories! Keep em' coming!
Author's Response: Wow thanks! I always thought I put too much dialogue in my stories but I'm glad to see that you like it :D
[Report This]Date: July 18 2012 8:00 PM Title: Immortal?
I always like stories where the character is immortal! Opens up SO many possibilities! Look forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review! :)
[Report This]Date: June 06 2012 10:50 PM Title: Bad day at school
Great and I like how u make Luke look like a total idiot
Author's Response: Thanks. Luke is actually based on someone I know in real life and he is really that stupid XD
[Report This]Date: May 25 2012 1:42 AM Title: Bad day at school
Nice, More would be good.
Author's Response: Thanks. I will continue this story when I have ideas for it. I don't want to just reuse ideas I had in my other stories, I want each story to be unique. Suggestions are always welcome though.
Date: May 17 2012 8:30 PM Title: Bad day at school
Off to a good start. Me likey.
Author's Response: Thanks :) its pretty hard starting a new story with different characters who have different personalities. I also find myself constantly writing Brad and having to change it to Robert :/