You are a master writer. Ok one I would love to hug u right now just for coming back to this story. In the past 2weeks ive come back to it like 10x lol. Two thid is by far the most cruelest story I have ever read. I wish God came down and actually took pity in Alisa. She is one of those characters who u actually feel bad for. I understand her thoughts on being crushed then actually being crushed. I dont know wht to say other than Plz oh Plz update again sooner rather than later! lol Again u my friend u are a Master!! "Feed Me More!"

I like this story a lot, especially the character of Anna and your descriptions of the foot action. I'm not really into the whole Mom thing but other than that it's perfect. Takes no wasted time to get into the good stuff, which is absolutely a good thing.

Poor Alisa. Poor poor Alisa. She doesn't deserve to be there T.T I wish I could do something to help her.

cant wait for this story to come back. hope u have time

i have reactivate my account just to tell you this is one of the best storys i have ever read pleaseeeeeeeeeeee continuo and if it its not to much give it a happy ending  

I hope she never gets out of the boot.  Maybe have her test alisa's durability under the sole of it ;)

You honestly have the best perspective of writing that I've read on this site.  Please continue forward with it, as I am now hooked and want to know where the story goes next!

Yes I want this story to continue please. I want to see what other kinds of hell Alisa is put through.

Dave

A nice addition. I do have a nitpick of sorts to make here, but understand that it's because I enjoy this enough to check for updates when I get on the site, and I feel invested in the narrative enough to care where it's headed. Personally, I feel like the story is strongest when told from Alisa's perspective rather than from her friend's or mother's. Your descriptions are well-done in both perspectives of course, but stylistically, I found it much easier to get into Alisa's head than the giantess characters'. This may be getting too deep for a fetish story, but the way you've framed what is, in essence, a science fiction story, Alisa is the closest connection a reader can have to normal, realistic logic (regarding the unfairness of her life, etc) while the giant characters who wear her in their shoes represent the foreign, antagonistic force that we are exposed to through the only existing voice of reason: Alisa.

So, long-story-long, I'm putting in my vote that you focus on the scenes depicting Alisa's POV in future chapters. I hope that made sense, and perhaps it was unnecessary when the main purpose of these kinds of stories is pure fantasy, but I personally have a ball pondering the psychological aspects of the whole concept, particularly in above-average stories like this one where a unique premise gives an opportunity for original scenarios, of which you have already delivered. Whatever you decide to do, keep it up sir.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the thoughtful addition, and I do think you're right.  I think it's a similar situation to your own series... I found "Big Sister Diaries" to be have the same "foreign" feeling you mention, and I honestly had the same thoughts about this chapter when re-reading it in line with the other chapters.  I actually had about 1000 words that were at the end of this chapter having this continue from Alisa's perspective, but it was getting a bit long and might work better in the next chapter.  Maybe I was mistaken to do so.  In the next chapter, we will we definitely be back in Alisa's head again.

Continue the story, it's very good. I'm really fan of this type of stories. I hope Alisa will spend more time under her mom's foot! And I hope you will count this from both point of vue(from Alisa's and from her mom's.