Date: February 24 2013 9:46 PM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
Well, Thanks Exiguus for the update. I wsn't the only one waiting it seems.
As for review, I personally enjoy the characters, their depth and their true reactions.
Hope to read some more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reply!
Date: February 24 2013 5:54 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
If feedback is what gets you to continue, then I'm happy to ablige.
I honestly feel you are the strongest "mental" writer in this genre, you're able to make the world feel so cruel and unfair, so wonderfully rich.
Anyways, you need to establish some ages here, for Wendy, for Anna, for her mother, for that stuff.
Other then that: Background, you need more background. How about an anectode about her sister which she killed? How about the transformation of Wendy/Anna towards accepting she's 'meant' to be small?
See, the thing is that while your situations are mentally realistic for the main character, you NEED to establish why her mother and father have become so cruel. Is it just power? Do other families work like this?
I dunno, you answer :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the thoughtful reply and the encouragement.
Concerning the background, or lack thereof... hopefully some of that will be filled in for you in the next chapter or two.
Date: February 24 2013 2:05 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
love the storry helped me a lot with my work :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 24 2013 1:09 PM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
LOVE this story; I may have to use this idea of "shrinkers" and the control that "normals" have over them.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback!
Date: February 24 2013 7:53 AM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
I love this story, I'm definitely following and I've been so looking forward to a Wendy chapter! Please give us more :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :)
Date: February 24 2013 12:33 AM Title: Momma's Little Insole
the only bad saide of your story is your taking to long to update it you have no idea how long i have been waiting for the next chapter of your story to be added please continue :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, hopefully I won't take so long next time! :)
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 11:20 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
honestly everyone should read this story its so damn good. I love the inner struggle of finding her place in life and the addition of cruelty and kindnest from her "BF" and her sister.
I love that u set up more time with anna. Oh I love sisterly bonding, I hope she is not to cruel.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouragement. Wendy will probably play a larger role in chapters to come (I'm not sure about this, but I'm leaning that way right now).
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 11:02 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
Yes! Yes! Yes! months of hope finally payed off. got my story back lol. thx for the update great ch.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2012 8:12 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush
wow this story gets me every time lol. hottest story i've ever read.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'd like to apologize for the next chapter taking so long to post. This is a busy time of year for me.
Date: November 21 2012 2:36 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush
Okay
This is the one single most best sotry ever.
Period.
Now bring on the chapter 8 so I stop refreshing the page everyday in vain.
Thank you.
;)
Date: October 21 2012 12:00 PM Title: Anna's Toe-Jam
Please keep up the good work. I would love to see more of this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 27 2012 5:53 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush
Love the story cannot wait to read the next chapter
[Report This]Date: September 25 2012 9:33 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush
Wow, I don't know how I've missed seeing this story on here all this time. But I've really been missing out. Being a huge fan of footplay and humiliation. I've read a great many stories involving such things. But very very few with the sense of scale that this one has. The fact that the main character was not only normal sized once, but cherished by her parents, just makes the whole thing that more intense. And show cases just how deep the effects of the shift in power has over people.
The very idea of someone being hellishly trapped in such a way, without the rest of the world having so much as a clue is a huge part of the story that I enjoy. Even if I do feel really really bad for the main character. But again, that in itself is because it's all so well written. You don't just guess at what she's going through. You experience itself. Both the physical and phycoligical pains of the torment she's going through.
Incredibly well done. I can't wait to read more!
Date: September 24 2012 7:36 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush
I love to see the girl under her mom`s feet. It would be nice to see her under Ms Pattie feet too!
Date: September 23 2012 9:35 PM Title: Underfoot and Out-of-Mind
Every so often an incredible story comes along.
Well, this is it.
I love how you phrase these things, truly a masterwork of humiliation... And all that good (bad?) stuff.
You should elaborate a little bit more about the world, you know? What shrinkers are exactly, you're not so clear.
Good stuff, though, really good stuff.
Date: September 23 2012 9:07 PM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
I love this story. I actually noticed that you removed a chapter from Anna's point of view. I actually thought it was a nice addition. Giving the giantess's perspective can really work well in these stories especially how she gloats in the former best friend status.
All in all I think this story is really well done. Nice descriptions and the torment works well. I would like to see what happens with this Ms Pattie. Maybe she get convinced over or shrunk herself? Either way I'm looking forward to more. Great job!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2012 9:30 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush
It's great to see you keeping the story in good shape rather than just adding!
I was wondering if there's a clean way to see chapter 6 as it was before the rewrite thoug -- I have it on my hard disk, so np for me, but I think that getting to see both sides of the story is a definite win.
Now I can't wait to see Ms Pattie.
Keep going!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. I figured someone would ask that, and I did give that option some thought, but I do think the story flows better without the distraction of switching characters. Also, I did make enough changes to the dialogue that things don't align perfectly anymore, so I would have to rewrite the original chapter again for it to truly make sense.
Thanks for commenting!
Date: September 23 2012 8:14 AM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
Before I say anything else I have to admit this this is a really strong story. I really feel for little Alisa. If I had any complaint it's that I feel so incredibly bad for her and I almost don't want the story to go any further because I feel it will only get worse.
I find myself really wanting it to get better for her and really wish this story had a happy ending down the line. Thank you for writting it.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2012 6:51 AM Title: The Girl Who Lived in a Shoe
A great story! I'm deffinitely following this! What I'm looking forward to seeing the most is some gentler foot interraction with Ms Patty, where our heroine embraces her special "tastes" and some playful, yet still relatively gentle interraction with her little sister! Please keep up the good work! :)
Date: September 23 2012 3:13 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush
agian great Chapters beautiful writing please continue :)