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Reviewer: tinyfootlover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fun with Little Mark

ur off to a nice start here is some of my ideas after awile he tries to escape and is caught and punished (as in idk puts him in her pussy for 24 hrs) but evently he starts to enjoy it but at the end she got what she wanted and is sick of mark so she she lets mark go or she shrinks him to epic porportions andkeeps him forever

 

Reviewer: Blondie99 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 3: Fun with Little Mark

Getting good. Cant wait to see where it goes from here. Maybe Emily can have a sleepover. That would bring others in and could open up some unaware action. But like i said, i like the way its setting up.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 8:12 PM Title: Emily Takes Control of the Situation

Looking good so far. If I know my stories, this is about to turn dirty, but with emotion behind it.

Can't wait!

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