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Reviewer: Bianca Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

The sexual tension is near palpable. I love the interaction between the two. he is scared and mad, yet at the same time, curious. She is playful and even nonchalant, but finds his situation absurd and something she seems to enjoy. I love it!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

A very good opening pair of chapters. I especially liked the closing line of the cliff-hanger! Is that a homage/allusion to the now-classic story by Dreamwatch (see "Old Archive")?

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