Date: February 10 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hello Tranc, many thanks for your comment. So pleased that you agree with me as regards the contents of stories on this excellent site - the only site that caters for the aficionados of femdom/cannibals. It's a pity you will not be able to read the full revision, but if you check my review to Doorknob you should find my email address...contact me and I shall gladly post the piece to you.
Date: February 09 2012 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is great, I love your stories, femcan is about femdom sex, not just eating, in my view that is .
Date: January 31 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, iki, it was rather short. That was because doorknob sent it in haste rather than await the whole piece. As for the lack of and content of my revised version, I must confess that I find the "fairy-tale" aspect of mirrors and shadows becoming rather tedious. I refer, of course, to the shrinking of victims etc. In my profile I state that I prefer the act of cannibalism with fully-grown male victims - the cannibals being female; and long, rambling yarns do tend to tire me. Everyone to their own, my friend. As for the sexual content, aren't all these stories relating to sex?
Date: January 30 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Personally, not as good as the previous stories about Brooke.
I disliked the whole sexual side of the story. It's just not for me. Also the writing and story-building isn't really that good. I don't mean to dismiss Banfields work, but Doorknobs writing is much better in my opinion. The story is too short, it feels unfinished and rushed. What i appreciate about Doorknobs writing is the attention to detail and the way he gradually builds up the story. I also like that his stories are strictly about vore, without the whole sexual seduction thing. I regret that the character of Brooke is not the same as she was in the other stories, where i found her much to be more appealing.
Date: January 30 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hello Doorknob, many thanks for posting my version on site. I had completed it to reveal to the readers what happened to Mark. Perhaps you might post the addition when I send it to you? It gets rather gruesome but nevertheless, pretty exciting.